Fingers of Mist
A 5-7-5 poem22 total reviews
Comment from HealingMuse
Hi Melissa,
Oooh, this is a great haiku, with a lovely image to make for a really excellent contest entry. No editing necessary here, as your verse is flawless. I really like your last line. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Hi Melissa,
Oooh, this is a great haiku, with a lovely image to make for a really excellent contest entry. No editing necessary here, as your verse is flawless. I really like your last line. Good luck and thanks for sharing. Jan :-)
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thanks so much, Jan. I really appreciate your comments!!
Melissa
Comment from Sally Law
Lovely 5-7-5 poetry offering. Deer are such sweet creatures. They live in the mountains and close to the busy streets. I never know where I'm going to see them.
All my best,
Sal xo
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reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Lovely 5-7-5 poetry offering. Deer are such sweet creatures. They live in the mountains and close to the busy streets. I never know where I'm going to see them.
All my best,
Sal xo
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Comment Written 15-Apr-2019
reply by the author on 15-Apr-2019
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Thank you, dear Sal!!
Melissa