Comment from susand3022

Excellent

Good evening CD, I really like this poem very much, it makes you think. I really like a poem that makes you think. It's true and I was saying the same to a friend not three days ago. You have to just learn to let go of things. Holding on to stuff doesn't do any good, it ties you in knotts and makes you physically ill. Everyone gets all wound up making mountains out of molehills. Nothing good comes of holding on to garbage... let it go.

 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019

Thanks very much for the great comments and the thoughtful response, Susan. Yes, it's funny how unimportant the things we think are critical often are. I'm glad you enjoyed :) Cheers, Craig

Comment from sfharper

Excellent

Nice prayer like tone of gratitude for the small things in life, the ABCDE nature of the poem is nearly visible it reads so well. I like the specificity of rose and fields. I enjoyed reading it.

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019

Thanks very much for the delightful comments. Much appreciated, Craig

Comment from Miss Sherry

Excellent

Nice verse for the contest. I wish you luck with this entry. I love your picture - such precious boys. Your verse is one of philosophy and great thoughts. I really like this verse a lotl.

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 Comment Written 05-Mar-2019

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reply by the author on 05-Mar-2019

Thank you, Miss Sherry, for the kind comments. The boys do look like they know something worth knowing, don't they? Most grateful, Craig

reply by Miss Sherry on 05-Mar-2019

Bless your heart and bless theirs - may they grow up to be happy men who do
well for themselves.