Renewal
the sparrow51 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the sentiments here, the first two stanzas are magical! The last but on line might sound better: 'innocently grin', this is just a suggestion for you, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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I love the sentiments here, the first two stanzas are magical! The last but on line might sound better: 'innocently grin', this is just a suggestion for you, love Dolly x
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you, Dolly. You know I am resistant to change. Lol
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He he he, you made me smile!
Comment from robyn corum
Victor,
This was a really cool one. I could relate really well. Wouldn't it be awesome to start over sometimes? Of course, we wouldn't know what we know and all that. *smile* Thanks!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Victor,
This was a really cool one. I could relate really well. Wouldn't it be awesome to start over sometimes? Of course, we wouldn't know what we know and all that. *smile* Thanks!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Hello Robin. Long time no see. Lol. Thank you.
Comment from Heather Knight
This is a beautifully written poem. I love the short lines and the great use of language.
The last verse is priceless. Full of hope.
Thanks so much for sharing.
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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This is a beautifully written poem. I love the short lines and the great use of language.
The last verse is priceless. Full of hope.
Thanks so much for sharing.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much.
Comment from June Sargent
If only we could just fly again and find new beginnings. Just aim towards the sunlight and never look back. Thanks for sharing a flight of fantasy...
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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If only we could just fly again and find new beginnings. Just aim towards the sunlight and never look back. Thanks for sharing a flight of fantasy...
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Yup, thank you.
Comment from susand3022
Isn't it funny Victor... First we sing, "Wouldn't it be nice if we were older, then we wouldn't have to wait so long..." then we're suddenly singing, "If I could turn back time... If I could find a way..." lol Somehow, someway... we've got to find that Shangrila in the middle!
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Isn't it funny Victor... First we sing, "Wouldn't it be nice if we were older, then we wouldn't have to wait so long..." then we're suddenly singing, "If I could turn back time... If I could find a way..." lol Somehow, someway... we've got to find that Shangrila in the middle!
Comment Written 25-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 28-Feb-2019
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Ha. Perhaps you are right.
Comment from victor 66
We take sparrows for granted and as far as I know, the worst you can say about them is that they're harmless. But, I've never known anyone that built a birdhouse for a sparrow. Or even really wanted to attract them to bird feeders. Looking closely at your illustration, sparrows are soothing to the eye. Best wishes
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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We take sparrows for granted and as far as I know, the worst you can say about them is that they're harmless. But, I've never known anyone that built a birdhouse for a sparrow. Or even really wanted to attract them to bird feeders. Looking closely at your illustration, sparrows are soothing to the eye. Best wishes
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Ms. Snyder
This is an absolutely beautiful and stunning poem it hits my loneliness and heart right it's mushy spot! I normally don't gush like this over a poem, but this time because I don't have a six so early in the week - I have to offer my Virtual Six to you and say how wonderful your words were to read. Cheers, Fonda
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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This is an absolutely beautiful and stunning poem it hits my loneliness and heart right it's mushy spot! I normally don't gush like this over a poem, but this time because I don't have a six so early in the week - I have to offer my Virtual Six to you and say how wonderful your words were to read. Cheers, Fonda
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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That was a wonderful review. Thank you.
Comment from TPAC
A delighting stir of views, compelling thoughts gripping my conscious, finding myself pondering presented ideals. A slight sway during course read in my opinion.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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A delighting stir of views, compelling thoughts gripping my conscious, finding myself pondering presented ideals. A slight sway during course read in my opinion.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Renewable", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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"Renewable", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. To me, this is definitely a six. I look forward to reading your next post. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING.
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Yes, my Lady. Thank you.
Kind Sir, as always, you're more than welcome.
Take care,God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess :))))) :)))))
Comment from meeshu
this is wonderful verse, it reads very much like a prayer. the short lines give it a quick pace and the language is simple and telling. great, Victortouche.................meeshu
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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this is wonderful verse, it reads very much like a prayer. the short lines give it a quick pace and the language is simple and telling. great, Victortouche.................meeshu
Comment Written 24-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2019
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Thank you.