God Speaks
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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Your word choices to build the acrostic were good. Each line offers readers much info and/or ways to improve their lives according to God's teachings and desires. The image is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
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Your word choices to build the acrostic were good. Each line offers readers much info and/or ways to improve their lives according to God's teachings and desires. The image is a good pairing with your well-chosen words. Thanks for sharing. Respectfully, Jan
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
Comment from Steven J Anthony
This is an excellent rich example of an acrostic. I love the fact that you can write with such beauty on the life of religion and how Gold can walk with us as a society. I feel like acrostic poems can be fun to poems to express the mindset of individuals who have a lot to say on a particular subject matter. Again, well done! Good luck in future contests.
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This is an excellent rich example of an acrostic. I love the fact that you can write with such beauty on the life of religion and how Gold can walk with us as a society. I feel like acrostic poems can be fun to poems to express the mindset of individuals who have a lot to say on a particular subject matter. Again, well done! Good luck in future contests.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
Comment from Iza Deleanu
I really liked your poem and especially this part of the poem "God has spoken and sent us words to survive and struggle for living
On surface, God provides us land for making our home to live temporarily
Discourage inhumanity to practice humanity -- we neglect God-warned duty"
I found these lines so inspiring, it's advice to go back to our origins.
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I really liked your poem and especially this part of the poem "God has spoken and sent us words to survive and struggle for living
On surface, God provides us land for making our home to live temporarily
Discourage inhumanity to practice humanity -- we neglect God-warned duty"
I found these lines so inspiring, it's advice to go back to our origins.
Comment Written 16-Apr-2020
Comment from The Death
It's quite a task to use a word 22 times in a poem, and still make it seem interesting. You managed to do that. Your dedication to God and His blessings to us can be easily felt through your words. You have made some excellent social and philosophical commentary here.
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It's quite a task to use a word 22 times in a poem, and still make it seem interesting. You managed to do that. Your dedication to God and His blessings to us can be easily felt through your words. You have made some excellent social and philosophical commentary here.
Comment Written 30-Jun-2019
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent entry in the Acrostic Fee Verse Poem prompt. It is also another great devotional. You should have this inscribed on a plaque and give them to your friends.
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This is an excellent entry in the Acrostic Fee Verse Poem prompt. It is also another great devotional. You should have this inscribed on a plaque and give them to your friends.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a difficult challenge to be sure, but one begun and accomplished by a faithful spirit. It accomplishes the requirements of the prompt in both direction and message, clearly stating the writer's devout commitment to our Father and his faithful witness in His Name...
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In my opinion, a difficult challenge to be sure, but one begun and accomplished by a faithful spirit. It accomplishes the requirements of the prompt in both direction and message, clearly stating the writer's devout commitment to our Father and his faithful witness in His Name...
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Ulla
Hi there, I think I've said it before, but your faith and belief must be all encompassing your whole being. I hope you do find comfort and release in your blind faith. Ulla:)
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Hi there, I think I've said it before, but your faith and belief must be all encompassing your whole being. I hope you do find comfort and release in your blind faith. Ulla:)
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from DeborahWrite
Dear Alcreator,
Your exceptional picture and long poem reveal a strong belief and faith. This poem reaches your reader and I found I learn from each of your poems.
My best,
Deborah
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Dear Alcreator,
Your exceptional picture and long poem reveal a strong belief and faith. This poem reaches your reader and I found I learn from each of your poems.
My best,
Deborah
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from Lance S. Loria
Walk with God conveys a strong Christian message for faith and obedience. The acrostic freestyle was very effective. Acrostic and repeating a word 22 times looks challenging but you succeeded.
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Walk with God conveys a strong Christian message for faith and obedience. The acrostic freestyle was very effective. Acrostic and repeating a word 22 times looks challenging but you succeeded.
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
Comment from robyn corum
ALD,
A very nice acrostic. I understand you have a great faith and I appreciate the way you are always willing to share it with others. Not everyone is so open with their faith. Thanks!
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ALD,
A very nice acrostic. I understand you have a great faith and I appreciate the way you are always willing to share it with others. Not everyone is so open with their faith. Thanks!
Comment Written 29-Jun-2019
