The Far Jump
The farthest Jump possible (maybe)26 total reviews
Comment from meeshu
This is a very good piece, consistent theme, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. you'd be famous too, if you jumped 700 ft. great job, Raul...............meeshu
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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This is a very good piece, consistent theme, good phrasing with great rhythm and flow. you'd be famous too, if you jumped 700 ft. great job, Raul...............meeshu
Comment Written 12-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2019
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Thank you! I am happy that you enjoyed it!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
Practice makes perfect comes to mind here and if we are intent on making something work we often succeed with dedication which is what your write is all about, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Practice makes perfect comes to mind here and if we are intent on making something work we often succeed with dedication which is what your write is all about, love Dolly x
Comment Written 06-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from Chris Davies
That was fascinating! It's hard to even imagine someone being able to jump that far. I would have been shocked at 70 ft. The picture draws you in and suits the story. Good luck with your contest!
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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That was fascinating! It's hard to even imagine someone being able to jump that far. I would have been shocked at 70 ft. The picture draws you in and suits the story. Good luck with your contest!
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you! :)
Comment from Graybærd
A good story of persistence and using the old proverb "If at first you don't succeed try try again". I do hope this is the moral due to jumping 700 feet. I might be missing something, otherwise I enjoyed reading.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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A good story of persistence and using the old proverb "If at first you don't succeed try try again". I do hope this is the moral due to jumping 700 feet. I might be missing something, otherwise I enjoyed reading.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you!
Comment from country ranch writer
Practice makes perfect as they say and he did it and didn't give up.we all know one must think positive and never give up. Nice work up for this poem good job.
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Practice makes perfect as they say and he did it and didn't give up.we all know one must think positive and never give up. Nice work up for this poem good job.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much!
Comment from apky
Tom Trident wanted to attempt an impossible jump that no one has imagined (you can leave out this word-possible- so that you needn't repeat it in such close proximity to "impossible).
Apart from that, you did an excellent story in just a hundred words.
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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Tom Trident wanted to attempt an impossible jump that no one has imagined (you can leave out this word-possible- so that you needn't repeat it in such close proximity to "impossible).
Apart from that, you did an excellent story in just a hundred words.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 05-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2019
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Thank you so much!
