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Can McKenzie solve Megan Nelson?s murder?

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Comment from Ben Colder
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Another good story I bet. Hope to hang in here with you. Sorry about the sickness but this change of weather seems to have everybody fighting a virus. Looking forward to your write.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    I agree. I hope you can stay with me through this. Your comments are always valuable.
Comment from Joy Graham
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Hello Barbara,

I'm delighted to find a prologue of a new story from you. I'm happy st be able to start reading from the beginning and follow along with each post. This murder mystery sounds intriguing. Looking forward to the first chapter.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Don't forget the romance part of it. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from c_lucas
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Good luck with this new novel. I'm sorry about my health issues which is keeping me off Fanstory. I have not posted in several weeks. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you.
Comment from Ulla
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H Barbara, I do hope you feel better now. So here we go. You've set the scene and lined up some of the characters. I'm looking forward to reading your new book, St Louis. My best American friends live in Missouri. We go back more than forty years. So this is a setting that's close to my heart. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the kind review. I grew up being a St; Louis Cardinals fan and spent a lot of time in St.Louis. One of my son's and his family live there now. I pray I can pull it off.
reply by Ulla on 04-Feb-2019
    I'm sure you can!!. We're here to help. But I know what you mean. You'll be fine. :)))
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
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This looks like it will be an interesting book. I look forward to reading it. I hope you feel better soon; those stomach bugs are a real nuisance. Take care.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    They sure are. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from robyn corum
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Barbara,

Wow. No moss growing on your stone, huh? I am always so impressed at your tenacity. You are my hero and a fabulous role model. As you know, with all my commitments, I have such a hard time just getting my teeny tiny chapters up at all!!! Thank you for starting a new book - I look forward to it. Good luck!

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you for your encouragement.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Hope you're feeling better. No hurry... rest is best.

So, three murders? Double homocide plus Megan. That's a lot of murders for one story. LOL! I predict Arlo will solve all three crimes, leaving Mack and Logan looking/feeling foolish. :)

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    I agree. LOL Thank you for the kind review. You know I have to have at least one dog in my stories.
Comment from judiverse
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I'm really intrigued by the possibilities of this. I like the idea of the action lady detective. The murder of her parents must play a large part in what's made McKenzie the person she is. Logan will probably not be satisfied with letting Mac take the lead in trying to solve his sister's mother. Great potential in this. judi

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Hello Barb
Ah, a new book for us to read. Yes, I like the setting for your story, the plot the characters and the list of questions you yet have to answer yourself . I know from what I read in your Prologue
Gert
I hope that you feel better -- Soon.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Thank you for the encouragment.
Comment from Tootsie55
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What a great start to some more new reading for all your many fans. Just one spag...Th(is)[ese] is only a condensed version of my notes. Have you see Michael Cahill has passed on up to Glory? I presume you would have known Michael?

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2019


reply by the author on 04-Feb-2019
    Yes, I knew Michael. I'm praying for family and friends.Thank you for the kind review.