Would You Believe...?
A librarian is faced with a startling revelation...26 total reviews
Comment from Rhonda Skinner
Clever and spooky. I'm thinking since you have " I continued" you could leave out "I mused" and use two words somewhere else if word count has to be exact. Just a thought.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Clever and spooky. I'm thinking since you have " I continued" you could leave out "I mused" and use two words somewhere else if word count has to be exact. Just a thought.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Rhonda -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from trimple
Good evening, Y.M
Oh, this is just fabulous! Love the twist with the invisible boy having to dress up so as to be seen :)
Really put a smile on my chops.
I wish you well in this competitive competition.
kind regards
tracey
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Good evening, Y.M
Oh, this is just fabulous! Love the twist with the invisible boy having to dress up so as to be seen :)
Really put a smile on my chops.
I wish you well in this competitive competition.
kind regards
tracey
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Tracey, and I'm so very glad you enjoyed the smile offered up here -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Miss Sherry
This is a very clever write. It takes one aback at first reading, Very good story for so few words. I kept wondering where the invisible boy was going, but I guess no one will know. Reminds me of those old radio shows and tv shows, Best of luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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This is a very clever write. It takes one aback at first reading, Very good story for so few words. I kept wondering where the invisible boy was going, but I guess no one will know. Reminds me of those old radio shows and tv shows, Best of luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Sherry, and the walk down memory lane with the radio stories -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from Debbie Pope
Do I recognize a theme that is in your book? I am thinking of those boots outside the tenement house. I'm still pondering that chapter.
This one is clever as well, but I think that I have it all figured out. The guy was invisible, and he was checking out The Invisible Man. Right? He left his clothes by the door because he did not need to be visible after he checked out the books.
Or, maybe he laughs when the librarian makes the no party comment because he is partying in the buff. . . Nah. He's invisible.
This one is fun, Yvette.
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Do I recognize a theme that is in your book? I am thinking of those boots outside the tenement house. I'm still pondering that chapter.
This one is clever as well, but I think that I have it all figured out. The guy was invisible, and he was checking out The Invisible Man. Right? He left his clothes by the door because he did not need to be visible after he checked out the books.
Or, maybe he laughs when the librarian makes the no party comment because he is partying in the buff. . . Nah. He's invisible.
This one is fun, Yvette.
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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And don't forget the other pairs of shoes earlier on... :) ;)
And yes! The intent was that he was actually invisible!! :) ;) Thanx for the review, MQ ... and no, I promise, no connection whatsoever between the two writes. :) ;) ;) You're so awesome - take good care down there! :) Yvette :)
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
LOL! Sounds to me like he ended up a little TOO visible, unless he had donned a shiny silver costume to act as a mirror. Otherwise, he really a book called "The Invisible Clothes".
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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LOL! Sounds to me like he ended up a little TOO visible, unless he had donned a shiny silver costume to act as a mirror. Otherwise, he really a book called "The Invisible Clothes".
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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LOL! Thanx for the review and the smile, Phyllis -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)
Comment from lyenochka
Lol. I hope he didn't follow the formula in the book. Doesn't the guy become insane? I can't remember the book now. But that's a very cute ending - with the clothes of the invisible boy outside!
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reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Lol. I hope he didn't follow the formula in the book. Doesn't the guy become insane? I can't remember the book now. But that's a very cute ending - with the clothes of the invisible boy outside!
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2019
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Thanx for the review, Helen -- have a wonderful weekend! :) ;) Yvette :)