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Viewing comments for Chapter 4 "Lords of Creation"Fiction and non-fiction prose
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Comment from bichonfrisegirl
Very creative, Craig! Greed has been the root of most of the evil in this world. I'd give you a six for this if I had one left. It was clever of you to approach this write from the POV of the cave men. Perfect pairing of picture and poem. In a mere 50 words, your dribble speaks volumes.
This is a great entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest, and it deserves to fare well. Best wishes, Craig!
Cheers,
Connie
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Very creative, Craig! Greed has been the root of most of the evil in this world. I'd give you a six for this if I had one left. It was clever of you to approach this write from the POV of the cave men. Perfect pairing of picture and poem. In a mere 50 words, your dribble speaks volumes.
This is a great entry for the Dribble Flash Fiction contest, and it deserves to fare well. Best wishes, Craig!
Cheers,
Connie
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thanks for the virtual six, the lovely comments and the good wishes, Connie. All mean a great deal. Most grateful, Craig
Comment from pome lover
very good - writing, dialogue and message.
also perfect accompanying picture for your post.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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very good - writing, dialogue and message.
also perfect accompanying picture for your post.
Good luck in the contest.
Katharine - pome lover
Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thanks so much for the good luck wishes and the very kind comments, Katharine. Most grateful -- Craig
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you're most welcome.
Katharine
Comment from Bill Pinder
This is an excellent message condensed into 50 words. I believe that is true that the worst enemy is the greed that lives in the heart of humanity. Instead of a healthy cooperation, many people turn to a destructive competition. Good luck in the contest!
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This is an excellent message condensed into 50 words. I believe that is true that the worst enemy is the greed that lives in the heart of humanity. Instead of a healthy cooperation, many people turn to a destructive competition. Good luck in the contest!
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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That was exactly the idea I was aiming for. Thanks for the kind words and good wishes, Bill. Cheers, Craig
Comment from jmshumate
This is a good bit of flash fiction. Reading this leaves a lot of possibilities for the readers mi d to consider. You could do a lot with this dribble if you wanted to expand to a longer story. How the greed of mankind escalated to the point that we destroyed our species could be presented in a thousand different ways. And then, where does the new species go from there? How did they come about? But in general, you gave the reader a valid point to consider. Greed brings upon destruction. Thank you for sharing.
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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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This is a good bit of flash fiction. Reading this leaves a lot of possibilities for the readers mi d to consider. You could do a lot with this dribble if you wanted to expand to a longer story. How the greed of mankind escalated to the point that we destroyed our species could be presented in a thousand different ways. And then, where does the new species go from there? How did they come about? But in general, you gave the reader a valid point to consider. Greed brings upon destruction. Thank you for sharing.
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Comment Written 01-Feb-2019
reply by the author on 01-Feb-2019
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Thank you for the thoughtful review, and you make several very good points. Yes, there are countless ways our greed might kill us. The kind comments are much appreciated. Craig