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Comment from estory
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Love the message here. Simply put, but it the issue in a nutshell. Children are a gift from God and you never know where He will take them in life. That's why all of them are precious and deserve a chance. So sick of the culture of death in young people today. Hope comes from the Lord. My prayer is that they will finally see that. estory

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO ESTORY: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there,

Thank you for sharing your view on this very personal issue. Your words speak volumes about the love for the child.

Unfortunately, not ALL children will be born into the best loving homes possible. Women are often beat for and during the pregnancy. All one has to do is look at the violence against children in this country to realize that some babies would do much better to remain with our Heavenly father,

~Mustang Patty~

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO MUSTANG PATTY: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from meeshu
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You have created some great images here, rhonnie. you call them like you see them, just as Mark does. your writing is thoughtful and descriptive. I could not agree with your message More!.....................meeshu

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO MEESHU: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially; rhonnie69.
Comment from Bill Schott
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This is a powerful message for readers to understand what is being $one and what future is denied to all involved. A soul lost as a fetus and as a player in this tragedy.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO BILL SCHOTT: Thank you for viewing and complementing my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
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What a lovely picture, Rhonnie, and the words you have added to it, are really thought provoking. Many who read them would stop and think about the child they are carrying. Well done! :) Sandra xx

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO SANDRA: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially; Rhonnie69.
Comment from giraffmang
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Hi there,

I have to say this appears a very simplistic way of portraying the argument. Perhaps if we put up some pictures of young children who display sexually harmful behaviour or rape to balance the scales? Or a battered child from the hands of parents who didn't really want them?

I'm not saying I disagree with your standpoint but it's a much more complicated thing. The religious aspect certainly wouldn't sway the multitudes who don't believe either.

In regard to the writing itself, technically it is sound and grammatically on point.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO GIRAFFMANG: Thank you for viewing and complimenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from LisaMay
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There is not enough here for me to comment on its creativity or original approach.
I can admire your simple, direct delivery, revealing your firmly-held religious convictions, but it doesn't persuade me that your viewpoint is the one-and-only answer to choices about pregnancy or termination. Of course no one would in all conscience murder a gorgeous grown child as in the photo..."How do you like me now?", but there are so many considerations in other people's lives that to make hard and fast judgements I feel is a bit narrow. Unfortunately we can't all believe the same things or feel the same way about things.
I am an adopted child and when I met my birth mother (I was 45yrs old) she told me she had tried to abort me when she found she was pregnant at a very bad stage of her life. I was not horrified, even though that would have meant I would never have existed, because I felt no judgement on her and could see that she felt she had run out of options at that time.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO LISAMAY: Thank you for viewing and commenting on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from tfawcus
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This states the anti-abortion case firmly and with a suitably emotive picture to seal the deal. Sadly, the choices are not always so clear cut. There are many shades of grey and sorrow. It's never a decision to be taken lightly.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO TFAWCUS: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
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Shocking, as it should be. I don't want to think about this sweet little girl being murdered in the womb. We need more ads like this, so people can see what abortion really does. Nothing worse than partial birth abortion. How can anyone justify that? Makes me sick.

 Comment Written 22-Jan-2019


reply by the author on 22-Jan-2019
    HELLO PHYLLIS: Thank you for viewing and complementing on my poem here. You are appreciated. God bless you. Cordially; rhonnie69.
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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This is a sensitive issue Rhonnie and brings to me so many conflicting ideas as women sometimes have a struggle in their lives, but aborting a child has devastating long term psychological effects on the woman, if only the decision was as straight forward as your write, love Dolly x

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 Comment Written 09-Jan-2019