Foundational Strength
In the end, they're all we have...33 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
Yvette, this is a lovely and meaningful poem. I like the photography and think it really showcases your verse. Great job on the overall write. It is a very good entry for the Lune contest.
All the best,
Melissa
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Yvette, this is a lovely and meaningful poem. I like the photography and think it really showcases your verse. Great job on the overall write. It is a very good entry for the Lune contest.
All the best,
Melissa
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Melissa -- guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written Lune poem. When we lay the deep and strong foundation in our children they will not disappoint us and they will remember our patience and attention forever.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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A very well-written Lune poem. When we lay the deep and strong foundation in our children they will not disappoint us and they will remember our patience and attention forever.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Sandra -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I love the play on words here Yvette and you are good at these short poems that seem to hit the heart with a cupid's arrow! You made a worthwhile point here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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I love the play on words here Yvette and you are good at these short poems that seem to hit the heart with a cupid's arrow! You made a worthwhile point here, much enjoyed, love Dolly x
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx so much for the encouraging comments, Dolly -- they mean a lot, ma'am! ;) I guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from country ranch writer
I love this picture of the little one helping it brings back memories of my boys helping their dad when little and following his in foots when they got older.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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I love this picture of the little one helping it brings back memories of my boys helping their dad when little and following his in foots when they got older.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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So glad you enjoyed the picture, country ranch writer - thank you. :)
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Comment from meeshu
that's a cute picture. your poem is sweet and borderline precious. the way kids are these days, be sure you file a copy of the AS-BUILT. great write, Yvette.......................meeshu
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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that's a cute picture. your poem is sweet and borderline precious. the way kids are these days, be sure you file a copy of the AS-BUILT. great write, Yvette.......................meeshu
Comment Written 21-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, dude -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes indeed, Yvette.
They most certainly are.
Your Lune is not the least bit looney at all.
In fact, it's kinda cute.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Yes indeed, Yvette.
They most certainly are.
Your Lune is not the least bit looney at all.
In fact, it's kinda cute.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Dean -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes your way -- take care! ;) ;) Yvette
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Same to you, and you're welcome.
Comment from Sally Law
Excellent and filled with heart. I know you have all boys and this could be one of yours very easily with your husband. How sweet is this?
All my best to you in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas with your family making new memories.
Sally
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Excellent and filled with heart. I know you have all boys and this could be one of yours very easily with your husband. How sweet is this?
All my best to you in the contest. I hope you have a wonderful Christmas with your family making new memories.
Sally
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thank you so very much for all your encouraging comments, Sally -- (it's not one of mine....need to get to converted all of those REAL photos one day, I guess - lol!) I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
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You are welcome! A blessed season!
Sal :+)
Comment from Mark D. R.
Yvette,
The picture with father and son is priceless. Your three-liner is most appropriate for the same. Your background color complements their construction hats.
Good luck In this competition.
Mark
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Yvette,
The picture with father and son is priceless. Your three-liner is most appropriate for the same. Your background color complements their construction hats.
Good luck In this competition.
Mark
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, Mark -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I LOVE this little message. How compelling and true. Investing time to make memories is well worth the "construction." Well-written and nicely formatted Lune (5-3-5). Your word choices and photo are perfection. I hope you win the contest. Good luck!!! :)
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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I LOVE this little message. How compelling and true. Investing time to make memories is well worth the "construction." Well-written and nicely formatted Lune (5-3-5). Your word choices and photo are perfection. I hope you win the contest. Good luck!!! :)
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Wow, Cindy -- you just made my weekend!! :) ;) As always, ma'am, I do appreciate your stopping by ....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)
Comment from jmshumate
I like this very much. You say a lot in so few words. The building of a boy into a man takes time patience and sacrifice of time and most of all love. This poem teaches a lesson to all, fathers, mothers, mentors. Thank you for sharing this.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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I like this very much. You say a lot in so few words. The building of a boy into a man takes time patience and sacrifice of time and most of all love. This poem teaches a lesson to all, fathers, mothers, mentors. Thank you for sharing this.
Comment Written 20-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2018
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Thanx for the read and review, JM -- I am so glad you enjoyed....guess I was feeling a bit nostalgic with all my 'big' boys coming home for the holidays. ;) ;) Sending special Christmas-Season wishes to you and yours -- take care! ;) ;)