The Dance
It's Never Too Late to Dance26 total reviews
Comment from Cass Carlton
How lovely that they have found each other at last and can stay side by side for the remainder of their lives. The poem is a sweet reminder that Love is evergreen and never really dies. The artwork is beautiful. So evocative of two people having a wonderful time together. Thank you for sharing this lovely story. well done cheers Cass
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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How lovely that they have found each other at last and can stay side by side for the remainder of their lives. The poem is a sweet reminder that Love is evergreen and never really dies. The artwork is beautiful. So evocative of two people having a wonderful time together. Thank you for sharing this lovely story. well done cheers Cass
Comment Written 04-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Cass, for such a lovely and thoughtful review and for honoring it with a six-star rating. What a nice surprise!
My best to you.
Connie
Comment from Debbie Pope
This is a sweet one, Connie. I like the dance motif that you use throughout. To dance stands for love, fun, companionship, letting others lead, creativity. It stands for so many things that this elderly lady was afraid to embark on. Her hesitancy is one of my favorite aspects of this poem. It makes it real. A new relationship must be hard when you feel that your time is almost done.
Thank you for this hopeful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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This is a sweet one, Connie. I like the dance motif that you use throughout. To dance stands for love, fun, companionship, letting others lead, creativity. It stands for so many things that this elderly lady was afraid to embark on. Her hesitancy is one of my favorite aspects of this poem. It makes it real. A new relationship must be hard when you feel that your time is almost done.
Thank you for this hopeful poem. I thoroughly enjoyed it.
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you, Debbie, for such a positive and encouraging review.
Your words truly made my day!
Thanks again, and my best to you.
Connie
Comment from kahpot
Bravo, excellent, wonderful, as I was reading this I kept looking back at the photo and seeing a love that had and never will burn out, you brought tears to this romantic soul, absolutely beautiful****kahpot
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Bravo, excellent, wonderful, as I was reading this I kept looking back at the photo and seeing a love that had and never will burn out, you brought tears to this romantic soul, absolutely beautiful****kahpot
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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What a wonderful review! And the six-star rating made it even more special.
Thank you so much!!
Connie
Comment from donette1914
very sweet and romantic and very touching
it truly is a pleasure to read your work
you really draw ones in
nice chosen words
nice photo
donette1914 dec 03 2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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very sweet and romantic and very touching
it truly is a pleasure to read your work
you really draw ones in
nice chosen words
nice photo
donette1914 dec 03 2018
Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much for your review.
Connie
Comment from RodG
I really like how you use the dance as a metaphor for a relationship the Speaker is willing to begin, following the "lead" of her new partner. I especially like the Speaker's optimism.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I really like how you use the dance as a metaphor for a relationship the Speaker is willing to begin, following the "lead" of her new partner. I especially like the Speaker's optimism.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you so much, Rod, for your encouraging review.
Connie
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from Janice Canerdy
This lovely, flowing poem vividly conveys the theme it's-never-too-late.
There are specific concerns for older people considering the plunge again;
those who engage are brave.
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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This lovely, flowing poem vividly conveys the theme it's-never-too-late.
There are specific concerns for older people considering the plunge again;
those who engage are brave.
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Comment Written 03-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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Thank you for a lovely review, Janice.
Connie