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A collection of award winning poems

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Comment from Mame
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Very clever use of the movie titles here. The picture fits the words too. I wonder though if there could be a better option than 'slime'? I realize it is just for fun it is just that I still have a soft spot for the old Cary Grant.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
    Thank you for honoring me with a six star rating especially this late in the week, mine are usually used up by Tuesday. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from tfawcus
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The only meter that counts with this one is the laugh-o-meter! You've arranged these very cleverly to tell a tale which, in itself, would make a good plot for a Cary Grant movie.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Galactia
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Hi

LOL I wasn't expecting your ending...merilly as we go to he'll.

This poem was humerous and flowed well.

Great job and Good luck in the contest. This should do well.

Regards
Tis

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2018

reply by the author on 01-Dec-2018
    Wow, a review that rhymes, how cool is that? I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work, thank you.
reply by Galactia on 01-Dec-2018
    Wow lol, that is funny. Fancy that, well atleast now I know where my flow went. :)

    Regards
    Tia
Comment from Helena Frances
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A fun and clever read!
Good flow and use of the titles of Cary's movies.
I enjoyed this a lot, though sorry about the hanging:0
Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you Helena. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from patsolstad
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I nominate this for cleverest poem I have seen all week! And, who knows? Maybe you have invented a new poetry form! You have used couplets throughout, except for the third line from the bottom. Excellent piece!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you, I'm not a poetry guy and I always get dinged by real poets for my style. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by patsolstad on 30-Nov-2018
    Sometimes it is difficult to consider 'outside the box' pieces, I think. I like to look at intention and then try to determine if the author achieved what he set out to do.
Comment from kahpot
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What an excellent poem for this contest, the movie titles are wonderful and continue the poem (story) very well, with great artwork, very well done and best wishes for your contest****kahpot

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Ha, love your author notes. I thought you wove the Cary Grant movie titles in very well so it's encouraging to hear it was a fun write. I enjoy these kind of puzzles too and you got the no good cheating two timer too.

Great luck in the booths with a most entertaining read. :)

Gloria

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from Janet Foor
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Well you nailed it. It definitely was fun. Also very creative and clever. Cary Grant is one of my all time favorites.

Well done and good luck in the contest.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much Janet. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
Comment from l.raven
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I love it...this took some work...and the rhyming doesn't seemed forced...one of my favorite actors...Cary Grant...very well written ...and I love the picture...and love your poem...love Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much Linda. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by l.raven on 30-Nov-2018
    you are so very welcome....love xxoo
Comment from Irish Rain
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Wow...I love Cary Grant movies! My favorite is 'The Bishop's Wife'. Is 'Merrily as we go to Hell' a movie?..because I missed that one. This sounds like it was a blast to write! Good job, good luck!
Blessings...

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2018

reply by the author on 30-Nov-2018
    Thank you very much. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review my work.
reply by Irish Rain on 01-Dec-2018
    You're most welcome!!