Haiku (sentinel trees)
Haiku Poem23 total reviews
Comment from Sugarray77
I love this entry for the Haiku Poetry prompt. Your verse deeply resonates and leaves the reader with the feeling that the trees are standing guard over the graveyard. Well done on this..
All the best,
Melissa
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
I love this entry for the Haiku Poetry prompt. Your verse deeply resonates and leaves the reader with the feeling that the trees are standing guard over the graveyard. Well done on this..
All the best,
Melissa
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I do apologise for the delay in response. However, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem Melissa. Your comments are very much appreciated, as always. ~DD
Comment from Mrs. KT
Hello Friend,
Exceptionally well-crafted haiku. All required elements of the form are present. But I especially appreciate your sartori - along with the artwork of the graveyard. So moving and solemn - allowing the reader to pause and reflect...
Best Wishes!
diane
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
Hello Friend,
Exceptionally well-crafted haiku. All required elements of the form are present. But I especially appreciate your sartori - along with the artwork of the graveyard. So moving and solemn - allowing the reader to pause and reflect...
Best Wishes!
diane
Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2018
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Diane, thank you so very much for your most encouraging and appreciation of my haiku poem. Your comments and shiny six stars really made my day. Thank you. ~DDx
Comment from Sally Law
This is a beautiful picture and the inspiration for your piece, I see. I especially love black and whites. It seems to radiate cold and winter better. A fine Haiku for the poetry contest!
All my best,
Sally
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reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
This is a beautiful picture and the inspiration for your piece, I see. I especially love black and whites. It seems to radiate cold and winter better. A fine Haiku for the poetry contest!
All my best,
Sally
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Comment Written 27-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 03-Dec-2018
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I do apologise for the delay in response. However, thank you for taking the time to review my haiku poem Sally. Your comments are much appreciated. ~DD