Comment from Pantygynt

Excellent

The distances involved are totally mindbending. Can it be possible that we are not alone? Can it be possible that we are. I have R.S.Poet writing on time travel just one day back in fiction and you goin millions of years back. I shall end up screaming soon. I did like the 5-7-5. I t had a splendid rhythm to it that you don't usually fine in those things.

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you, I have to catch up and read Robert's story. I fell way behind last week!
Carol

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I enjoy poetry and prose all the more when authors give authors notes such as yours. It helps take the guess work out of the equation. Well done.Don and Vicki,

 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thank you, I'm glad you found the notes helpful!
Carol

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very well written 5-7-5 poem for the contest. You used Very good descriptive words with very lovely art work. Best wishes in the contest. Teri

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018

Thanks so much for the kind comments,
Carol

Comment from Anntonette

Excellent

The author notes was remarkable, glad you added details about light in your notes. This was very descriptive in my books, saying so much in short form is hard to do but you achieved that. Well done!
- Anntonette J

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 Comment Written 05-Nov-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Nov-2018

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem and the notes! I love this kind of stuff :))
Carol