All that's left of me is you
My biggest part26 total reviews
Comment from Adri7enne
Well done, Dr. Dip. It's an accomplishment to spend an entire life with one person, even when things are not always perfect. Being able to weather the storms together and come out on the other side, still holding on to each other makes for a more secure life, that's for sure. Just a couple of things you might want to look at.
"You're my my pill that really calms." You've written MY MY" Remove one of them.
There's not many things I have left. " THERE AREN'T " to go with the plural, "things."
Well done!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Well done, Dr. Dip. It's an accomplishment to spend an entire life with one person, even when things are not always perfect. Being able to weather the storms together and come out on the other side, still holding on to each other makes for a more secure life, that's for sure. Just a couple of things you might want to look at.
"You're my my pill that really calms." You've written MY MY" Remove one of them.
There's not many things I have left. " THERE AREN'T " to go with the plural, "things."
Well done!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Adri I have revisited and fixed a few typo errors and have also re tweaked a couple of words. Really appreciate your thorough review.
dip
Comment from Sally Law
This is grand and sweet as sugar! I am new to FanStory and I have never seen your photo posted before today. Love it! I am pressing 64 and still with my husband of 43 years, the love of my life. I am a blind writer now as my eyesight is growing dim. He loves me more than ever and does not even seem to care that I cannot see well. True love...I am blessed! I see you are, too!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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This is grand and sweet as sugar! I am new to FanStory and I have never seen your photo posted before today. Love it! I am pressing 64 and still with my husband of 43 years, the love of my life. I am a blind writer now as my eyesight is growing dim. He loves me more than ever and does not even seem to care that I cannot see well. True love...I am blessed! I see you are, too!
All my best to you and yours,
Sally
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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What a wonderful review Sally I am so glad you enjoyed it. Thank you so much for going to the trouble.
dip
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My privilege entirely!
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
To be partners with someone for a very long time takes patience and understanding and the rewards are well worth the attention paid and the ups and downs, your poem is a tribute to coupled who love and stay together until the end, love Dolly x
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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To be partners with someone for a very long time takes patience and understanding and the rewards are well worth the attention paid and the ups and downs, your poem is a tribute to coupled who love and stay together until the end, love Dolly x
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Dolly. I just realized, because I have been reviewing you quite often when I visit be it fleetingly, my member cent pumps had been slowly adding up so this is the first time in 9 months or so I think I've actually promoted a write past the '2 cent' worth lol.
I really appreciate the fact you review my poetry, no matter the 'dollar value', not a common thing on this site in the 'dash for cash' mentality.
xdip
Comment from kiwijenny
I love this saying and I love this saying....my husband you might say is my fix.
We laugh together often. I love this poem All that's left of me is you...adorable as the Bible says of marriage is we are one.
God bless for the oneness
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reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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I love this saying and I love this saying....my husband you might say is my fix.
We laugh together often. I love this poem All that's left of me is you...adorable as the Bible says of marriage is we are one.
God bless for the oneness
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Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Jenny. Your review is so appreciated
dip
Comment from Kelly Hanna
What a beautifully written poem. I admire your piece very much. It flowed just like an expensive love poem that one would give as a gift. I really enjoyed it. You've done a fantastic job. I'm not sure about you being middle aged or not. But wisdom seems to abound here. Great write!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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What a beautifully written poem. I admire your piece very much. It flowed just like an expensive love poem that one would give as a gift. I really enjoyed it. You've done a fantastic job. I'm not sure about you being middle aged or not. But wisdom seems to abound here. Great write!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Thank you so much Kelly your wonderful six means a lot to me.
dip
Comment from Susanjohn
There is no better writing than that what comes from the heart!!! Such an emotional heart felt write!... Dear Dip at his finest!...I love just how expressive you are. This one in particular oozes gratefulness. Well done!!!!
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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There is no better writing than that what comes from the heart!!! Such an emotional heart felt write!... Dear Dip at his finest!...I love just how expressive you are. This one in particular oozes gratefulness. Well done!!!!
Comment Written 04-Oct-2018
reply by the author on 04-Oct-2018
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Susan coming from one of my most favourite romance poets that means so much to me. I sincerely wish you all the best with your wonderful poetry book you have just launched I am sure it will be a top seller for you. You so deserve all the accolades you can get.
I am so grateful to you for going to the trouble to review my humble write and to be given a 6 from you certainly makes my night
I will go to bed now with Susan securely under my pillow lol
xxxdip