Act of Endurance
Viewing comments for Chapter 92 "Hold Death's Hand"Dawn of Chaos
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Comment from Ricky1024
Been there done that been in the pit of depression open the trapdoor and saw hell said let's say or should I call down there or not I've danced with the Devil he's sick and tired of me this phone is deep and dark poetry well done great descriptive measures here taking injecting object of contents spoon day sugar. Non fun as it flowed well-read well with November issue is happy holidays dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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Been there done that been in the pit of depression open the trapdoor and saw hell said let's say or should I call down there or not I've danced with the Devil he's sick and tired of me this phone is deep and dark poetry well done great descriptive measures here taking injecting object of contents spoon day sugar. Non fun as it flowed well-read well with November issue is happy holidays dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2018
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I wish the same back pertaining the holidays, wishing best for families. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed thoughts.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This tells the story how, precisely, endurance, helps reaching high success to hold death hand; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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This tells the story how, precisely, endurance, helps reaching high success to hold death hand; well said, well done. Keep Writing, Keep Inspiring. Happy New Year! -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 28-Dec-2018
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Again, finding myself captured and glad that my writes were found appealing to your interests, thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from jmshumate
This is a well written poem, you used a lot of descriptive words, I think I read another one of the chapters of this and probably would have to read them all to fully understand " death hand" your poem flows well and you write good. Maybe I will read more of these. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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This is a well written poem, you used a lot of descriptive words, I think I read another one of the chapters of this and probably would have to read them all to fully understand " death hand" your poem flows well and you write good. Maybe I will read more of these. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 26-Dec-2018
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Glad aspects of this act of endurance touched you. Thanking you for your generous rate and sincere views.
Comment from Joan E.
Yes, death is inevitable and you portrayed it dramatically in these tercets. Your "chained by a collar" image is quite vivid. To life and endurance! -Joan
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Yes, death is inevitable and you portrayed it dramatically in these tercets. Your "chained by a collar" image is quite vivid. To life and endurance! -Joan
Comment Written 23-Dec-2018
reply by the author on 24-Dec-2018
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Glad aspects of this write were appealing to your interests. Thanking you for your generous rate and welcomed response.
Comment from Gert sherwood
I agree TPAC
Instead of facing a host of sorrows
Hold on to Jesus hand
for better tomorrows.
so we can push
open a door of happiness ...
and padlock our doors of sadness. (HELL)
Gert
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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I agree TPAC
Instead of facing a host of sorrows
Hold on to Jesus hand
for better tomorrows.
so we can push
open a door of happiness ...
and padlock our doors of sadness. (HELL)
Gert
Comment Written 05-Nov-2018
reply by the author on 05-Nov-2018
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I will consider your point as a statement of some right. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
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You are welcome
Gert
Comment from Artasylum
TPAC... nobody has a contract with death and therefore too true we hold death's hand every day and one day it whisks you away to hopefully a better place. yours, diana
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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TPAC... nobody has a contract with death and therefore too true we hold death's hand every day and one day it whisks you away to hopefully a better place. yours, diana
Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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So they say: Jesus thinks otherwise. A good friend. Thanking you for your generous rate.
Comment from country ranch writer
Tomorrows are never promised to any of us and we should make the best of each day. Take it one day at a time and appreciate what you have no matter what little you have.
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reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Tomorrows are never promised to any of us and we should make the best of each day. Take it one day at a time and appreciate what you have no matter what little you have.
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Comment Written 29-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 29-Sep-2018
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Seem the best way to live, caring for life and not promote death. Thanking you for your generous rate and touching views.
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