Comment from Y. M. Roger

Excellent

Wow - now this is the most lively, upbeat entry I've reviewed today -- just love the way it makes the reader smile!! :) Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Hello Yvette!
So pleased you enjoyed!
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed reading your 575 on Autumn. Good job with the prompt. Your syllables are correct per line. The picture is super. I like the rhyme with days/blaze. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan

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 Comment Written 23-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

Hello Jan,
And I snuck "praise" in there, too! :)
Thank you for your excellent rating and complimentary review!
Glad you enjoyed!

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 23-Sep-2018

Of course--cross rhyme. I love rhyme.

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

I struggle with rhyme.
I try... but I really struggle!

reply by Jannypan (Jan) on 23-Sep-2018

Do you use rhymezone.com?

reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018

All the time...
It's not the words; I don't think my mind wraps around rhyme as fluidly as it does for most folks.
I prefer tetractys; it's my favorite poetic form = no rhyme! :)