Ode To Autumn
Ode To Autumn Contest Submission30 total reviews
Comment from Kelly Grim
This is great! Love the personification of autumn and winter in this short poem! "blazing glory" is fabulous! The picture is perfect and the color is great! Excellent contest entry!
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This is great! Love the personification of autumn and winter in this short poem! "blazing glory" is fabulous! The picture is perfect and the color is great! Excellent contest entry!
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from jaded831
Your words captures autumn beautifully. I read your poem multiple times to get its full impact. Your poem flows smoothly, and is true to form, and abides by the rules. The picture you chose compliments your poem. Good luck.
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Your words captures autumn beautifully. I read your poem multiple times to get its full impact. Your poem flows smoothly, and is true to form, and abides by the rules. The picture you chose compliments your poem. Good luck.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from kiwijenny
Autumn wears her crown
In all its blazing glory
Jack Frost rejoices
This is a glorious ode..if Jack marries Autumn would they have a baby Spring?
Well penned
God bless
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Autumn wears her crown
In all its blazing glory
Jack Frost rejoices
This is a glorious ode..if Jack marries Autumn would they have a baby Spring?
Well penned
God bless
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Air Spirit
Beautifully penned... the picture is exquisite.. and Autumn, is by far, my favorite season.. the one in which I was born.. your ending sentence "Jack Frost rejoices" is lovely... I love the personification, of winter feeling 'joy' with the approaching winter frost... lovely..
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Beautifully penned... the picture is exquisite.. and Autumn, is by far, my favorite season.. the one in which I was born.. your ending sentence "Jack Frost rejoices" is lovely... I love the personification, of winter feeling 'joy' with the approaching winter frost... lovely..
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
Comment from Donka Kristeva
This creative 5-7-5 makes the reader "welcome" Autumn. The images and word choice are effective. Stunning art work, tells the story even without words.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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This creative 5-7-5 makes the reader "welcome" Autumn. The images and word choice are effective. Stunning art work, tells the story even without words.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed it.
Take care and have a great day.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your picture choice + well-chosen words make a great pairing. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like how you personified Autumn and Jack Frost. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Good job, Mystery Author, with your contest entry. Your picture choice + well-chosen words make a great pairing. Your syllable count is correct per line. I like how you personified Autumn and Jack Frost. Thanks for sharing. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hello poet,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Take care and have a great day.
Comment from Lance Polin
I don't know . . . a little too obvious for me. It's not the language, which is sharp. It's certainly not the picture. Although I believe you did not give it justice. There's something subliminally creepy about this snapshot. What was it once an add for, because no one is getting that snap on vacation or for a brief pose. It is a professional shot maybe selling that hideous autumn-colored long scarf. Or it's a Wicca or fairy-religion recruitment add. It's just for some S & M club or European brothel. Something a little more pointed could make this terrific. Good luck, and remember--my thinking is only one way. It was you who put this piece up for judgment.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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I don't know . . . a little too obvious for me. It's not the language, which is sharp. It's certainly not the picture. Although I believe you did not give it justice. There's something subliminally creepy about this snapshot. What was it once an add for, because no one is getting that snap on vacation or for a brief pose. It is a professional shot maybe selling that hideous autumn-colored long scarf. Or it's a Wicca or fairy-religion recruitment add. It's just for some S & M club or European brothel. Something a little more pointed could make this terrific. Good luck, and remember--my thinking is only one way. It was you who put this piece up for judgment.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hello,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I appreciate your comments.
Take care and have a great day.
Comment from poetwatch
The leaves are falling for autumn is saying her last goodbyes. It's a very good way to pen a farewell. Jack Frost is the villain in the poem as he freezes everything with his cold touch. This is a good 5-7-5 entry for the Ole To Autumn contest.
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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The leaves are falling for autumn is saying her last goodbyes. It's a very good way to pen a farewell. Jack Frost is the villain in the poem as he freezes everything with his cold touch. This is a good 5-7-5 entry for the Ole To Autumn contest.
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hello,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Take care and have a great day.
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Hooray for the personification of both fall and winter while paying homage to the queen of fall!! :) :) Great job and wonderful compilation of pic and prose! :) ;) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hooray for the personification of both fall and winter while paying homage to the queen of fall!! :) :) Great job and wonderful compilation of pic and prose! :) ;) Thanks for sharing and good luck in the contest! :)
Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hi there,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Have a great day!
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
A stunning photo and the words that you used to capture the sentiment of autumn are well-written. A cleverly crafted 5-7-5. A great contest entry. Good luck to you.
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reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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A stunning photo and the words that you used to capture the sentiment of autumn are well-written. A cleverly crafted 5-7-5. A great contest entry. Good luck to you.
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Comment Written 23-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 23-Sep-2018
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Hi there,
Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. I am so glad you enjoyed it.
Have a great day!
