Woodland Lullabye
Florette poem, variation #236 total reviews
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
I adore the last line and your whole poem has an ambient glow which fills me with setting suns and natures pleasures, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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I adore the last line and your whole poem has an ambient glow which fills me with setting suns and natures pleasures, a joy to read, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you, Dolly. Much appreciated.
Comment from Gloria ....
Wow, that's really a beautiful picture, Yvonne, but not as beautiful as your exquisitely rhymed and metred florette.
Just lovely and a relaxing read on a mid September eve.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Wow, that's really a beautiful picture, Yvonne, but not as beautiful as your exquisitely rhymed and metred florette.
Just lovely and a relaxing read on a mid September eve.
Much enjoyed. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much. That makes me really happy.
Comment from Dawn Munro
Oh wow, Yvonne, what a beautiful poem! I needed this one tonight -- the serenity is marvelous, and the woodland scene so easy to imagine. Thank you for sharing. I plan to bookcase this gem and read it many times.
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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Oh wow, Yvonne, what a beautiful poem! I needed this one tonight -- the serenity is marvelous, and the woodland scene so easy to imagine. Thank you for sharing. I plan to bookcase this gem and read it many times.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 16-Sep-2018
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That's so sweet, Dawn. Thank you for the wonderful compliment.
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My pleasure. :)
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yvonne
This is AWESOME! Your poem is one of the best I have read in a long, long time. Your presentation is super--love the color scheme, the picture is perfect, the font is beautiful, the scattered alliteration is used to great advantage, and your message is loud and clear. This sounds wonderful read aloud. I love the theme. You did an excellent job expressing your thoughts/feelings in this well-composed poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Yvonne
This is AWESOME! Your poem is one of the best I have read in a long, long time. Your presentation is super--love the color scheme, the picture is perfect, the font is beautiful, the scattered alliteration is used to great advantage, and your message is loud and clear. This sounds wonderful read aloud. I love the theme. You did an excellent job expressing your thoughts/feelings in this well-composed poem. Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Wow! Thank YOU for this lovely review. You saw more in this poem than I did. lol. I'm so happy you like it.
Comment from lyenochka
Such a beautiful picture you've captured with this poem, Yvonne. I enjoyed the alliteration, assonance and well-chosen rhymes (guard, scarred, starred) and what a charming picture of the woodland nighttime scene!
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Such a beautiful picture you've captured with this poem, Yvonne. I enjoyed the alliteration, assonance and well-chosen rhymes (guard, scarred, starred) and what a charming picture of the woodland nighttime scene!
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you so much, Helen. I appreciate your comments. You're always so positive. 8-)
Comment from kiwijenny
the forest gently wrapped in moonlight's soft sarong.......this is so sa-right...I love the imagery...gorgeous poem
Dulcet keys...scarred ....starred
Well penned ..great art too
God bless
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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the forest gently wrapped in moonlight's soft sarong.......this is so sa-right...I love the imagery...gorgeous poem
Dulcet keys...scarred ....starred
Well penned ..great art too
God bless
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you. I appreciate that very much.
Comment from Mastery
"gnarled and scarred"
These are just two of the strong verbs you are using in this poetry, Judy. As you know, Verbs are King. They propel a story or poem full speed ahead with meaning. Rustle is another.
Great poem, my friend. Bob
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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"gnarled and scarred"
These are just two of the strong verbs you are using in this poetry, Judy. As you know, Verbs are King. They propel a story or poem full speed ahead with meaning. Rustle is another.
Great poem, my friend. Bob
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for pointing that out, Bob. By the way, I'm still Yvonne. lol
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Why in the hell do I keep calling you Judy then????? LOL I am so sorry. Bill (LOL)
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Don't worry. It's okay. I'll just have to change my name. lol
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Whew! Thanks Janet. (LOL)
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Oh, you! LOL LOL LOL
Comment from June Sargent
I don't now which is lovelier, your artwork or your words. This is a beautiful florette. As usual, you have done a great job of meeting the requirements. I enjoyed the read.
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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I don't now which is lovelier, your artwork or your words. This is a beautiful florette. As usual, you have done a great job of meeting the requirements. I enjoyed the read.
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you, June. I'm going to look at your soon.
Comment from LIJ Red
So, five lines per stanza instead of four...looks like you did a fine job of writing a style II florette. And for sheer tranquility, the deep woods are really hard to beat.
(except when the crows catch a hawk near their nests)
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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So, five lines per stanza instead of four...looks like you did a fine job of writing a style II florette. And for sheer tranquility, the deep woods are really hard to beat.
(except when the crows catch a hawk near their nests)
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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That's true. There's nothing so peaceful as a walk in the woods. Thank you, Red.
Comment from Irish Rain
This is just so mesmerizing. I love all the softly rhymed words, exquisite. Aside from the content being so lovely in itself, the picture too, is perfect. I think this is the best poem I've read this week.
Blessings...
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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This is just so mesmerizing. I love all the softly rhymed words, exquisite. Aside from the content being so lovely in itself, the picture too, is perfect. I think this is the best poem I've read this week.
Blessings...
Comment Written 15-Sep-2018
reply by the author on 15-Sep-2018
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Thank you for this wonderful compliment. I appreciate your review so much, and you lovely comments.
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You're most welcome Miss Yvonne!!