Comment from Adri7enne

Excellent

I'm not very knowledgeable when it comes to poetry. I read it and I can see it follows the rules, lots of lovely alliterations but duh! What else can I say about it. Pretty colored letters. I can imagine you smiling as you wrote it. Had fun reading it. Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

You are hilarious, Adri7enne -- probably the most honest review I've received in a long while!! :) :) And you have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as paradoxes, duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thank you for stopping by for the read and review (or at least the color appreciation, my friend!) and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Wow! Talk about alliteration...LOL this is a flurry of the good stuff, Yvette. I love it. No reason you shouldn't win this ABCX poetry contest. It just doesn't get any better than this, my friend. :) Bob

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

You are too generous, Bob, but I am so very grateful for your comments anyway!! :) :) And you have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as paradoxes, duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thank you for stopping by for the read and review and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

reply by Mastery on 09-Sep-2018

Thank you, too, Yvette. Bob

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Now, who would have predicted that?
Not my hubby ...he never proposed...just showed me how he wanted his undies folded...lol
I'm still folding them that way.
Good abc poem
God bless

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

You are hilarious, Kiwi! :) :) And you have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as paradoxes, duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thank you for stopping by for the read and review and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from royowen

Exceptional

I love both, it spices up ones reading and creative writing, it rakes up a whole new sense of awakening and probing one's inner being, stokes and prices one's hunger to know destiny's delight, esoteric ecstasy, colliding collectives, to plumb paradox, to be able to spice up one's verbal verbosity. Excellent entry in this ABC contest Yvette, well done, it deserves my last six, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

You are far too awesome, Roy! :) :) And you have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as paradoxes, duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thank you for stopping by for the read and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

reply by royowen on 09-Sep-2018

Well done

Comment from Artasylum

Excellent

Who indeed... not me Y.M... Very compelling poem and the presentation the psychedelic coloration between words and visual yin and yang.... good luck in your contest. yours, diana

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Diana, so good to be hearing from and seeing your beautiful face around again -- missed ya!! :) :) And you have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thank you for stopping by for the read and may you have an awesome week ahead on the West Coast filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

What a fun and yet thought-provoking one and still an ABC poem with lots of alliteration! Life is full of paradoxes that we need to learn to live with and negotiate so we'll just expect them!

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Helen, and especially for those wonderful comments! :) :) You have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) And you are so very right about paradoxes and such -- as the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as paradoxes, duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thanx for stopping by for the read and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)

Exceptional

This is a very well written ABC poem, my friend. I love the double rhyme which really enhances the enjoyment of this meaningful poem. Best wishes in the contest~Debbie

 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Debbie, and especially for those wonderful stars! :) :) You have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thanx for stopping by for the read and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)

Comment from A Fractal Heart

Excellent

What a beautiful little poem you have written about duality! Duality is something I enjoy writing about myself. The common space between two opposite and seemingly uncompromising emotions, ideas, ideologies is fodder for an endless source of inspiration and growth. Thank you for sharing this piece!

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 Comment Written 08-Sep-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Sep-2018

Thank you so very much for your review, Fractal Heart, and especially for those wonderful comments! :) :) You have guaranteed I will start the week off with a smile on my face - much appreciated! :) :) As the Crazy Math Lady, I'm always fascinated by topics such as duality, chaos, and more so, once in a while, it seeps into the writing...or takes over as was probably more of the case here! LOL! :) :) Thanx for stopping by for the read and may you have an awesome week ahead filled with cool shady spots amidst the fading summer heat...and smiles about them both!! :) ;) Yvette :)