Comment from MissMerri

Excellent

I think this is an excellent six-word poem, Craig. It asks such a thought-provoking question... but in a way that leaves the reader unsure which answer the author might choose. I know this was your intent and it is very cleverly done. My only complaint is the large and colorful first word... presented as it is, it seems like a title and not part of the poem, when of course, it is the primary word in the poem. No doubt that is why it is large and colorful. Well... I think you know what is best, but do consider presenting it in a way that is more symbiotic. ;")

It is a great poem actually. I'm just cranky I guess. But always honest, much like CD.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Your observation is spot on, MM. On your advice, I changed humanity to bring it in line with the rest of my creation ;-)

Why cranky?

Cheers,
Craig

reply by MissMerri on 19-Aug-2018

Only too tired, I imagine. Tomorrow I will be fine. Thank you for considering a cranky reviewer's suggestion. I guess you're never cranky. LOL ;p

Comment from Pamusart

Excellent

Hi Craig. This is a great entry for the contest. I think we are nature's Parasites. It would be best if nature invents a plague that kills most of us except for the poor. Those who would not know how to use WMDs. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thanks very much for the great comments and the good wishes, Pam. Both are appreciated. Craig

Comment from tfawcus

Excellent

Now that's quite a bit deeper than some of the six word 'poems' that have been appearing recently! A pithy little summary that could well be up there among the leaders.

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thanks very much, Tony. I appreciate the positive comments. Craig

Comment from bichonfrisegirl

Exceptional

Clever and very thought provoking, Craig. I can't believe how much you managed to cram into a mere six words. Bravo!

From one end of the spectrum to the other ... pinnacle to parasite ... which are we? I'd say we're both. We'd like to think that we're the "pinnacle of creation", but truth be told, we are a "parasite to nature". Man continually places himself higher than anything else. It will likely be our eventual demise.

Lovely presentation with great impact. Best wishes for the contest with this great entry!

Cheers,
Connie

 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thanks so much for the fantastic comments and wonderful rating, Connie. Glad you enjoyed, and very grateful. Craig

Comment from Dawnya

Excellent

Ouch, that stings with truth. An excellent use of six words to create a lasting reaction. I really thought it must have more than six words and counted them. Ha! Well done.

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

I'm most relieved, Dawnya. I think not having six words could be a real hindrance to doing well in the contest lol

Much appreciated, Craig

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

This is a great presentation, Craig. Your 6 words, as required, are thought-provoking & at the same time a little scary as to the answer. Your color scheme works well as does your chosen picture & formatting of the lines with different colors & size. I believe humankind believes there is nothing better than it & everything else takes a back set. Good job & best wishes. Jan

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 Comment Written 19-Aug-2018

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reply by the author on 19-Aug-2018

Thanks very much for the kind comments and good wishes, Jan. Both are much appreciated. Craig