Twin sisters
Very different lives55 total reviews
Comment from rhonnie69
HELLO JENINTORRE: After viewing your noteworthy work here I get the feeling that Joan and Jane are indeed exactly identical twins. Maybe not physically. But our twins are certainly born identical at heart. Joan abides in Jane...and Jane abides in Joan. That's what makes them exactly identical twins. They are both equally pretty...and they dwell in each other. Which makes Joan a whore...and Jane a nun. Nevertheless...we love both of them equally...not for what they are...but for who they are...who are two identical twin sisters...who are two adorable females...all wrapped in one lovable lady. I love them. Cordially: rhonnie69.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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HELLO JENINTORRE: After viewing your noteworthy work here I get the feeling that Joan and Jane are indeed exactly identical twins. Maybe not physically. But our twins are certainly born identical at heart. Joan abides in Jane...and Jane abides in Joan. That's what makes them exactly identical twins. They are both equally pretty...and they dwell in each other. Which makes Joan a whore...and Jane a nun. Nevertheless...we love both of them equally...not for what they are...but for who they are...who are two identical twin sisters...who are two adorable females...all wrapped in one lovable lady. I love them. Cordially: rhonnie69.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I love your comments. Thank you so much for the great review.
Comment from CD Richards
Oh dear, you've given me more than enough rope to hang myself with all the comments I could make about this. So I won't - I'll just say it's wonderfully good fun.
The last stanza is the icing on the cake. What a great finish (I'm thinking only one of them has ever said that).
Well done, thanks for the laugh.
Craig
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Oh dear, you've given me more than enough rope to hang myself with all the comments I could make about this. So I won't - I'll just say it's wonderfully good fun.
The last stanza is the icing on the cake. What a great finish (I'm thinking only one of them has ever said that).
Well done, thanks for the laugh.
Craig
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Hi Craig
I am so pleased you liked my little bit of nonsense as I really value your opinion. Cheers Jen
Comment from Robbie Yates
Ah - this is hilarious! I love the contrast, the beautiful imagery, the way you tackled even their daily grind with poise and wit. The ending made me cackle. This is the first 6-star review I'm giving out :)
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Ah - this is hilarious! I love the contrast, the beautiful imagery, the way you tackled even their daily grind with poise and wit. The ending made me cackle. This is the first 6-star review I'm giving out :)
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Twin sisters", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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"Twin sisters", is an extremely well-written and entertaining piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. To me, this is a six, but unfortunately I only have fives left. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for your great review.
Comment from Boogienights
This is very clever and funny..a great contest entry. Talk about polar opposites! This is very original and should do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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This is very clever and funny..a great contest entry. Talk about polar opposites! This is very original and should do well in the contest. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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THANK YOU SO MUCN FOR THE GREAT REVIEW.
Comment from Writeling
With its amusing surprise at the end, I really enjoyed reading this. Your rhyming pattern is clever and doesn't feel 'strained'.
with best wishes, Writeling
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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With its amusing surprise at the end, I really enjoyed reading this. Your rhyming pattern is clever and doesn't feel 'strained'.
with best wishes, Writeling
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for the great review
Comment from poetwatch
Well, I must say you got the poem and the story has a twist. Not bad, though the thoughts that travel in the minds of two twins is like you penned "they are like two peas in a pod." Hormones have no religion they will excite you when you least expect. Good entry for the Story poem contest.
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Well, I must say you got the poem and the story has a twist. Not bad, though the thoughts that travel in the minds of two twins is like you penned "they are like two peas in a pod." Hormones have no religion they will excite you when you least expect. Good entry for the Story poem contest.
Comment Written 06-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your great review.
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work. I burst out laughing at the last line. What a gem! I love how you contrast the two lifestyles and the acceptance each sister has for the other. They are more alike than different as shown by the last two lines. The poem has great pace and reads well silently and out loud. Very good writing. Hugh
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Excellent work. I burst out laughing at the last line. What a gem! I love how you contrast the two lifestyles and the acceptance each sister has for the other. They are more alike than different as shown by the last two lines. The poem has great pace and reads well silently and out loud. Very good writing. Hugh
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your great review
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
I love this clever story/poem. It reminded me of my mom and her sister. Neither were the extreme whore/nun, but it was close. My mom was more the "nun." I enjoyed this read and it's a great entry for the contest. Good luck!
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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I love this clever story/poem. It reminded me of my mom and her sister. Neither were the extreme whore/nun, but it was close. My mom was more the "nun." I enjoyed this read and it's a great entry for the contest. Good luck!
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jul-2018
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Many thanks for your great review.
Comment from William Ross
Very nicely written in a free form style, so true about how twins can be as different as day and night. good luck on the contest with this piece and have a great day.
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Very nicely written in a free form style, so true about how twins can be as different as day and night. good luck on the contest with this piece and have a great day.
Comment Written 05-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jul-2018
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Thank you so much for reviewing