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Comment from Donka Kristeva
Very impressive work. I know nothing about life of a cowgirl but this poem, in its clear description, beauty, peacefulness and emotional intensity gives me a taste of that life.
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Very impressive work. I know nothing about life of a cowgirl but this poem, in its clear description, beauty, peacefulness and emotional intensity gives me a taste of that life.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thanks for the review and your kind words, much appreciated,
Carol
Comment from RodG
I really like how you aPUT US THERE in that meadow in early autumn with Savannah and the narrator. Your emphasis on golden leaves emphasizes that fantasy aspect you missed after leaving for the city.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I really like how you aPUT US THERE in that meadow in early autumn with Savannah and the narrator. Your emphasis on golden leaves emphasizes that fantasy aspect you missed after leaving for the city.
Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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I remember walking out in that field to catch Savannah and imagining to myself that I lived there...I am glad that you felt you were there as well. There are so many cottonwood trees in western Montana and they all turn this deep gold in October - so beautiful! Fall always makes me feel nostalgic. Thanks for a great review :)
Carol
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My pleasure. Rod
Comment from royowen
Beautifully written Carol, excellent imagery, amid descriptively scribed excellence. The observational language is as bold as on one can write in a poem of this quality, superbly delivered in a sea of imaginitve text, well done, blessings, Roy
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Beautifully written Carol, excellent imagery, amid descriptively scribed excellence. The observational language is as bold as on one can write in a poem of this quality, superbly delivered in a sea of imaginitve text, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thanks so much, Roy,
Carol
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Most welcome Carol
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem it is a perfect match I always wanted to go out west and live a cowgirls life style well now i'm to old to get on a horse
i enjoy the read
thank you for sharing
cookie
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reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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I like the artwork you choose to go with your poem it is a perfect match I always wanted to go out west and live a cowgirls life style well now i'm to old to get on a horse
i enjoy the read
thank you for sharing
cookie
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Comment Written 01-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 03-Jul-2018
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Thanks, Cookie, I am sure when I'm older I may not ride anymore - not easy on your back!
Carol
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Your very welcome
Well some time the ride does end my friend. Happy trails to you when the time comes
Cookie