Free Verse Collection
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Comment from estory
Loved it. I think you have a great metaphor for the memory of the soldiers, the appreciation of them, in the tolling bells, gravely telling their story. very solemn, rendered in an honest voice, very emotional. The rhythm really captured that sense of the bells tolling, like speaking the names of the lost. Each one seems precious, like each sound of the bell. estory
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Loved it. I think you have a great metaphor for the memory of the soldiers, the appreciation of them, in the tolling bells, gravely telling their story. very solemn, rendered in an honest voice, very emotional. The rhythm really captured that sense of the bells tolling, like speaking the names of the lost. Each one seems precious, like each sound of the bell. estory
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thanks, estory. This one arose from the remnants of a dream. Unusual for me. Glad you enjoyed it, and very many thanks for the sixth star. Best wishes, Tony.