FAMILY TIES.
Viewing comments for Chapter 42 "Push!""ALL IN THE FAMILY."
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Comment from Ulla
Hi there, this is a wonderfully different poem. It really made me smile. It is so funny yet at the same time it's so very sweet. The imagery is marvelous. Yes, I definitely enjoyed reading this. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Hi there, this is a wonderfully different poem. It really made me smile. It is so funny yet at the same time it's so very sweet. The imagery is marvelous. Yes, I definitely enjoyed reading this. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from Heather Knight
I have enjoyed reading your poem very much. It's moving at funny at the same time and I like the fact that you've structured it as if it was a dialogue between a mother and a son.
Good luck in the contest.
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I have enjoyed reading your poem very much. It's moving at funny at the same time and I like the fact that you've structured it as if it was a dialogue between a mother and a son.
Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from William Ross
very good, a story type poem has great rhyming, reads well for the poem and story. Nicely done. Good luck on this and have a great day.
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very good, a story type poem has great rhyming, reads well for the poem and story. Nicely done. Good luck on this and have a great day.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
That was both funny and sweet, Rhonnie, I loved it. I'm sure your mother will love it if you write it in her mother's day, card. I would. lol. We had our mother's day in March. UK. This is a lovely contest entry, good luck! xxx Sandra
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That was both funny and sweet, Rhonnie, I loved it. I'm sure your mother will love it if you write it in her mother's day, card. I would. lol. We had our mother's day in March. UK. This is a lovely contest entry, good luck! xxx Sandra
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from Hitcher
A nice take on a mother and son's relationship, from the pea to God for a son to his mother pushing him out into this world. Love, honor, respect and obedience the building blocks of a wonderful relationship... Nice!
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A nice take on a mother and son's relationship, from the pea to God for a son to his mother pushing him out into this world. Love, honor, respect and obedience the building blocks of a wonderful relationship... Nice!
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from Sugarray77
You have written a fun and rollicking Mother's Day Poetry entry. The dialogue between your two characters is mutual and free-flowing. Well done on this.
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You have written a fun and rollicking Mother's Day Poetry entry. The dialogue between your two characters is mutual and free-flowing. Well done on this.
Comment Written 01-May-2018
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"Push!", is well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
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"Push!", is well-written and thought-provoking piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. You KEEP WRITING and I'll KEEP READING. I look forward to seeing your next post.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
Comment from happykat4
Wanting a son and Jesus answers .The birth process adds to the poems content."
All the pain ensures because son is worth it .
My pride and joy,it hurts so good". Along with"he's got a big head"
because he is smart.Even the birth pain can't deter you.
The reader knows Christ is at the hey of this home. Pushing!! And your son is very respectful of our Lords laws or commandments the poem speaks to that and he will obey and respects his mom. Good luck in the contest. Kat
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Wanting a son and Jesus answers .The birth process adds to the poems content."
All the pain ensures because son is worth it .
My pride and joy,it hurts so good". Along with"he's got a big head"
because he is smart.Even the birth pain can't deter you.
The reader knows Christ is at the hey of this home. Pushing!! And your son is very respectful of our Lords laws or commandments the poem speaks to that and he will obey and respects his mom. Good luck in the contest. Kat
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
This is so wonderful. A great tribute to Mother's Day, for sure. I enjoyed the story/poem throughout. I am sure you make your mother proud of your kindness, love of God, and your talent! Good luck to you in the contest.
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This is so wonderful. A great tribute to Mother's Day, for sure. I enjoyed the story/poem throughout. I am sure you make your mother proud of your kindness, love of God, and your talent! Good luck to you in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
Comment from Roxanne56
Oh but I remember those years. Of pushing, screaming, crying. I think I even fainted one time and I did it seven times! But I wouldn't change a thing. Thanks for the memories. GOD Bless you :)
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Oh but I remember those years. Of pushing, screaming, crying. I think I even fainted one time and I did it seven times! But I wouldn't change a thing. Thanks for the memories. GOD Bless you :)
Comment Written 30-Apr-2018
