Perennials of War
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Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, I liked this chapter a lot. Shana reminds me of a young doe. The slightest noise makes her jump, and she takes flight. I hope she'll soon relent to Drew. I'm still waiting. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Hi Barbara, I liked this chapter a lot. Shana reminds me of a young doe. The slightest noise makes her jump, and she takes flight. I hope she'll soon relent to Drew. I'm still waiting. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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It will happen, I promise. All in due time. Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Ben Colder
Now look at ya. Gone and done wrote another good book. One lucky hog. He missed the BBQ LOL. I'm hooked. Now what are we going to do about those Russians.
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Now look at ya. Gone and done wrote another good book. One lucky hog. He missed the BBQ LOL. I'm hooked. Now what are we going to do about those Russians.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Those Russians will rear their ugly heads very shortly. Thank you for the kind review.
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During the cold war , my comrade in arms and I use to keep their heads pinned down. LOL.
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Our first tour of Germany was before the wall came down and I remember many times we would go on alert. Every time the Russians moved. I was teaching first grade at and American school and we would have armed soldiers walk the school, just in case.
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My time during Russian invasion into Hungry. Long before the wall ever thought of.
Comment from giraffmang
So the folks are filled in and this serves as a refresher for the reader on the broader strokes. Nicely done.
They also, went to Munich - either delete the comma here or insert another one after They.
Well Dad, how's that for a story. - maybe a question mark in here too.
"I've even caused problem for your businesses." - either problems or a problem here.
We've had a busy day. I think we should call it night - call it a night.
"Drew, are these walls sound proof?" - soundproof can be a single word here.
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reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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So the folks are filled in and this serves as a refresher for the reader on the broader strokes. Nicely done.
They also, went to Munich - either delete the comma here or insert another one after They.
Well Dad, how's that for a story. - maybe a question mark in here too.
"I've even caused problem for your businesses." - either problems or a problem here.
We've had a busy day. I think we should call it night - call it a night.
"Drew, are these walls sound proof?" - soundproof can be a single word here.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 22-Apr-2018
reply by the author on 22-Apr-2018
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Thank you. I have made all the corrections. My dictionary had soundproof as one word. I should have checked it before.