Perennials of War
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Anderson is a real stand-up guy, but even stand-up guys can only contain themselves for so long. But maybe he'll be able to refrain from his pursuit longer than Shana. LOL! Thanks for sharing.
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Anderson is a real stand-up guy, but even stand-up guys can only contain themselves for so long. But maybe he'll be able to refrain from his pursuit longer than Shana. LOL! Thanks for sharing.
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I have fixed my typo. Thank you for the catch.
Comment from c_lucas
In today's world, relationships are more flexible. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
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In today's world, relationships are more flexible. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review.
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You're welcome, Barbara. Charlie
Comment from Ben Colder
So we are going to Austin. I see you got everything done.. You have cleared up much pondering with this write. So Sir Galahad rides off into the west with his intended. Good one.
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So we are going to Austin. I see you got everything done.. You have cleared up much pondering with this write. So Sir Galahad rides off into the west with his intended. Good one.
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. More will be revealed as we read. LOL
Comment from Ulla
Hi Barbara, this was an excellent chapter, Drew has real feelings for Shana, and I loved the way you showed that. I hope she will be won over. I can't wait for that to happen. Very well written chapter. All the best. Ulla:)))
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Hi Barbara, this was an excellent chapter, Drew has real feelings for Shana, and I loved the way you showed that. I hope she will be won over. I can't wait for that to happen. Very well written chapter. All the best. Ulla:)))
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reply by the author on 01-Apr-2018
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I honestly don't think it will until the end, but she does have slip ups. LOL Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Anderson is a real gentleman, you don't see many like him around these days. I do think he'll win Shana over eventually. This was a really excellent part, my friend. Well done. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Anderson is a real gentleman, you don't see many like him around these days. I do think he'll win Shana over eventually. This was a really excellent part, my friend. Well done. Big hugs, Sandra xxx
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Thank you for the kind review.