Perennials of War
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Comment from Ric Myworld
Your chapters never leave any loss for action. Even when there isn't any shooting or tailing going on. There is always something that keeps us readers on our toes. Thanks for sharing. :-)
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--Anderson rolled over to answer his ring(ing) cell, hoping it didn't wake Shana.
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Your chapters never leave any loss for action. Even when there isn't any shooting or tailing going on. There is always something that keeps us readers on our toes. Thanks for sharing. :-)
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--Anderson rolled over to answer his ring(ing) cell, hoping it didn't wake Shana.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I will make that correction. Thank you.
Comment from c_lucas
I am a victim of a bone disease who has beaten the odds. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
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I am a victim of a bone disease who has beaten the odds. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the wonderful review.
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You're welcome.
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello Barb
now is the first time that I heard that Sarah has
Tay-Sachs disease!
Barb, look at this part of this chapter--
When Shana woke, she saw Anderson sitting at the small table reading files. "Good morning, don't you ever sleep?"
He grinned. "I do and I did. Philip called.
Barb did you mean to say Anderson (instead of Philip?)
I had a few things that needed my attention." He closed the file. "Would you like me to leave and bring back breakfast while you get ready?
Gert
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Hello Barb
now is the first time that I heard that Sarah has
Tay-Sachs disease!
Barb, look at this part of this chapter--
When Shana woke, she saw Anderson sitting at the small table reading files. "Good morning, don't you ever sleep?"
He grinned. "I do and I did. Philip called.
Barb did you mean to say Anderson (instead of Philip?)
I had a few things that needed my attention." He closed the file. "Would you like me to leave and bring back breakfast while you get ready?
Gert
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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I meant that Philip called and woke Anderson up. Anderson had some more work to do. Yes, earlier I stated Sarah had Tay-Sachs. I figured enough time had past that I needed to bring it up again. Thank you for the kind review and I will check that area.
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Hi Barb you are welcome
will be waiting for your next chapter
Gert
Comment from His Grayness
I found this to be exceptionally skillful writing with smooth delivery of a somewhat complex story, made very easy to follow! This work is so good that I really cannot offer any kind of ideas that might improve it in any way and I want to thank this author for a very well done and interesting work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
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I found this to be exceptionally skillful writing with smooth delivery of a somewhat complex story, made very easy to follow! This work is so good that I really cannot offer any kind of ideas that might improve it in any way and I want to thank this author for a very well done and interesting work! HIS GRAYNESS; Vance
Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the encouraging review.
Comment from jppoet
Recommended by a few of your fans, this is my first read of your writing and find it a literary delight, adroit of dialogue, story-pace and suspense. It was good that you added a character list so that new readers, like myself, are easily brought into your story. look forward to more.
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Recommended by a few of your fans, this is my first read of your writing and find it a literary delight, adroit of dialogue, story-pace and suspense. It was good that you added a character list so that new readers, like myself, are easily brought into your story. look forward to more.
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Thank you for the kind review. I'm glad to hear this novel has been recommended. That makes me feel good.
Comment from royowen
The romance continues to blossom between Anderson and Shana, and she's coming to feel safe in Drew's presence, I can see the near future coming into focus. Poor Sarah's child, I wonder is something can be done? Great episode Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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The romance continues to blossom between Anderson and Shana, and she's coming to feel safe in Drew's presence, I can see the near future coming into focus. Poor Sarah's child, I wonder is something can be done? Great episode Barbara, well done, blessings, Roy
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Comment Written 11-Mar-2018
reply by the author on 11-Mar-2018
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Tay-Sachs, even today, is still a death sentence. Thank you for the kind review.
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Nature is so unkind