Exhausted
Hard at Work23 total reviews
Comment from joeruptak
What a great little story and told so well
it reminded me of a time when I was young and my roommate and I were trying to have an afternoon nap while there was construction going on out on the street
. I guess I am a youngster at heart. I really did enjoy your story
. Thank you for a happy start to my day
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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What a great little story and told so well
it reminded me of a time when I was young and my roommate and I were trying to have an afternoon nap while there was construction going on out on the street
. I guess I am a youngster at heart. I really did enjoy your story
. Thank you for a happy start to my day
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2018
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I'm a youngster, too, and glad you are. Thanks for a wonderful review.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks life begins with challenges and living means struggles, nothing is easy, particularly supervising, so it was a hard day indeed; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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This speaks life begins with challenges and living means struggles, nothing is easy, particularly supervising, so it was a hard day indeed; well said, well done. Thank you for sharing this with us. KEEP WRITING, TIP CHANGING. DR ALCREATOR
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Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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They make great straw bosses, but poor workers. lol. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Yvonne,
This is so cute/ I enjoyed reading it. The picture is precious. I like the color-coding of the dialogue. Those words sound just like what 2 'kids' would say, too. Your words were fun to read & told a great little story. Any animal that comes to love with you is lucky to have found you & they know it.
Thanks for sharing & caring for the little animals for real. Jan
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Yvonne,
This is so cute/ I enjoyed reading it. The picture is precious. I like the color-coding of the dialogue. Those words sound just like what 2 'kids' would say, too. Your words were fun to read & told a great little story. Any animal that comes to love with you is lucky to have found you & they know it.
Thanks for sharing & caring for the little animals for real. Jan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 22-Feb-2018
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Awww, thank you. I'm the lucky one. Each one is a blessing. I've decided not to build. They already have a house. Mine. lol