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Comment from Dolly'sPoems
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Your memories of your childhood come flooding back in this write Michael, seeing that old tree which will probably outlive you, he he he. Such memories bring us joy and restore the fun we felt back then, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018

Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Mikey;
How do you write something and NOT have notices go out? Do you disable it?

Anyway, I found this charming. I wonder if it is all of us that have a swing like that in our past? Or does it just seem that way?

Your presentation was a bit like the ebb and flow of the swing's movement as we soared higher and higher.

Thank you for sharing, even if you didn't mean to,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 29-Jan-2018


reply by the author on 29-Jan-2018
    Yes. You disable it while it's in preview mode. Then restore it. Notices don't go out. :))

    You're too kind. Thanks so much. I glad you liked it. I've been enjoying your writing although you wouldn't know it. LOL

    mike