Comment from Zue65

Excellent

You have a way with words and a unique skill in writing poetic lines. This poem glides smoothly and the story infused in the poem is interesting. Thanks for sharing an excellent writer. All the best.

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review, kind words, and time.
Dr Ricky 1024

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hello Ricky Yes to read of what you believe you son was thinking would make want to cry
But I won't to me tears are meant to the ones who don't know how to express their deepest thoughts to Our Heavenly Father
Gert

 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Two hours to do what I need to do Jason one want you to cry for him he's happy where he's at now and I know he's in a better place Kurt thanks for this doctor Ricky 1024

reply by Gert sherwood on 20-Jan-2018

You are welcome Ricky
Gert

Comment from Sam Roote

Excellent

Another amazing, powerful poem! Thank you for sharing this. This is just as powerful as the other posting that you made today. Absolutely incredible, and well written!

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 Comment Written 20-Jan-2018

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reply by the author on 20-Jan-2018

Aww
And took mere minutes.
Dr Ricky 1024