Perennials of War
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Comment from Sis Cat
Barbara, this feels like a classic romance that reminds me of many mismatched pairs in culture and history. I sensed Shana's hesitancy:
Anderson opened the box, revealing two pearl and diamond earrings.
Shana's hand covered her mouth. "They're gorgeous, but I can't accept them."
Class gets in the way if this couple getting together.
"I'm middle class and you're high class."
Also, religion.
The reader cheers this couple on and wonder how or when they will get together. This is compelling writing.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Barbara, this feels like a classic romance that reminds me of many mismatched pairs in culture and history. I sensed Shana's hesitancy:
Anderson opened the box, revealing two pearl and diamond earrings.
Shana's hand covered her mouth. "They're gorgeous, but I can't accept them."
Class gets in the way if this couple getting together.
"I'm middle class and you're high class."
Also, religion.
The reader cheers this couple on and wonder how or when they will get together. This is compelling writing.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the generous review.
Comment from royowen
It looks like Shana and Anderson are "connecting" a mutual attraction is materialising, except Shana is the one who the "fly in the ointment", and Anderson shows all the frustration of one not understanding certain "barriers"...at least in the mind of Shana, well done, excellent job, blessings, Barbara, Roy
Typo : I can't believe this (is) me. 2: "Sorry(,) Shana,
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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It looks like Shana and Anderson are "connecting" a mutual attraction is materialising, except Shana is the one who the "fly in the ointment", and Anderson shows all the frustration of one not understanding certain "barriers"...at least in the mind of Shana, well done, excellent job, blessings, Barbara, Roy
Typo : I can't believe this (is) me. 2: "Sorry(,) Shana,
Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the catches. I appreciate the help..
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Welcome Barbara
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
There is no need to ask for forgiveness when this is so beautifully written. There are tears in my eyes from the way he proffered the earrings. This is simply a lovely post and continues the saga wonderfully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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There is no need to ask for forgiveness when this is so beautifully written. There are tears in my eyes from the way he proffered the earrings. This is simply a lovely post and continues the saga wonderfully. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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Thank you for the encouragement.
Comment from Sankey
We will pray as you have asked. Another great chapter. Hoping they can get around their differences. Now some spags. Either "I hear(d a) rumor dinner will be served
OR
"I hear (a)rumor dinner will be served
"She shouldn't have to[o]."
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We will pray as you have asked. Another great chapter. Hoping they can get around their differences. Now some spags. Either "I hear(d a) rumor dinner will be served
OR
"I hear (a)rumor dinner will be served
"She shouldn't have to[o]."
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Comment Written 10-Dec-2017
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2017
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I have made the corrections. I am always nervous about my first few reviews because I see all the stupid mistakes I've made. Thank you.