Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)

Excellent

Ricky my heart goes out to you and your beautiful wife who you sadly lost I am so devastated for you especially knowing the abuse she suffered from her mother, brother and all the other things including losing you precious son god bless you Ricky for keeping your faith and knowing the best are often taken first and it is so sad she will be a saint in heaven now for her suffering was so severe it could only happen to an angel and I can see she was one. If I had a six I would give you that. I will wait for your next post about the sad story of your wife's lif, many kind regards and god bless you Meia x

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Later today with the conclusuon,with her death, tomorrow....
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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

A beautiful tribute to your lovely wife and your write is heartfelt and honest, I wish you well Ricky, time passes but we always remember our loved ones, best wishes, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks Dali more later today with the conclusion with her death tomorrow thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca

Excellent

Yes they were beyond your control as other plans for her life were made. We may not understand but we have to accept, there is no choice

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks Barbara More following this today and then with the

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

You say positive words about your wife. I am sure she is looking down from heaven and is proud of your poetry. You keep her spirit alive in your poems. Keep writing about your loved ones.

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Yes I am sure she is this will be completed later today I will go into the harshness and the depth and her pain from her abuse by her tour family members in her first husband thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from kiwigirl2821

Excellent

The words you use are harsh Ricky. "there will not be any snow to cover this filthy earth" got to me particularly. Just as I seem to always write about love and romance you write about death and pain. We are almost like two peas in a pod on opposite ends of the earth. Good luck mate. xoxo Kiwi

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

What kiwigirl the harshness of the words about the Earth is because she was a member of this plan and she was abused whole life from as early as her mother to one of her brothers who raped her to her first husband who was a piece of s*** out alcoholic drug addict and beater so you will find out more about this and this harshness as I perceive this further and blended into this beautiful poem so be sure to catch it later and then you learn all completely about Caroline thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin

Excellent

Hi, Ricky

= Nice dedication to your deceased wife.
= She was a beautiful gal.
= So sorry for your loss of her, as well as your son.

Cheers, J
*** Merry Christmas & Happy New Year ***
(*.*) A Smile Is Just A Smile Turned Upside-down (*.*)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks my dear Jack's Franklin and my early Christmas present is your wonderful caring and thoughtful review I do hope later on since I've been bad boy or all year even in my poems I hope God doesn't punish me and erases them all LOL thanks dr. Ricky 1024

Comment from Mystic Angel 7777

Excellent

This is simply a lovely tribute, Sweetie. The powerful depth of emotion is evident in every word. She is looking down on you beaming with love. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks thanks Angel + from one angel above looking down to another doctor Ricky 1024

Comment from amahra

Excellent

Did I miss something or did you clean the poem up? You had all of these warnings and I saw nothing offensive about the writing. Just a beautiful ode to your wife. So did I miss something?

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 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Now you didn't miss anything this is the violence was her first husband in her and her mother will come in the next part thanks for being concerned and reviewing this talk to Ricky 1024 that'll be released sometime today of course on the 7th

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Exceptional

Poet dedicates this poem to his wife Carolyn Ann Richmond Smrkovsky on her birth anniversary, and remembers her love, sacrifice and precious character and their divine earthly destined living till 1994; I like. DR ALCREATOR (6-STAR)

 Comment Written 07-Dec-2017

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reply by the author on 07-Dec-2017

Thanks all Creator and be sure to it later on today on the 7th to catch the second part where she is abused by her her mother and one of her brothers and then her first husband who was a heroin addict talk to Ricky 1024