I Feel You, Charlie Brown
Just one look at my tree...24 total reviews
Comment from Lucian Carter
What an awesome and fitting title. It sets up the poem perfectly without actuaqlly giving anything away. This is certainly humorous, but don't knock your poor little tree. It's doing its best.
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What an awesome and fitting title. It sets up the poem perfectly without actuaqlly giving anything away. This is certainly humorous, but don't knock your poor little tree. It's doing its best.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from LIJ Red
Unless it has re-emerged on TV, you are going back in history. Oldtimers remember Charlie Brown's tragic Christmas twig. Humorous 5/7/5 indeed. Does the contest fault relying heavily on the artwork?
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Unless it has re-emerged on TV, you are going back in history. Oldtimers remember Charlie Brown's tragic Christmas twig. Humorous 5/7/5 indeed. Does the contest fault relying heavily on the artwork?
Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Well, this Write a Humorous 5-7-5 entry put a needed smile on my face. Thank you! It's not as bad as you think - the lights work and the tree is up : -) Good luck. ~DD
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Well, this Write a Humorous 5-7-5 entry put a needed smile on my face. Thank you! It's not as bad as you think - the lights work and the tree is up : -) Good luck. ~DD
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2017
Comment from Boogienights
Lol that's very funny. Honestly though I love that tree! I can't stand perfect trees that are color coordinated, every branch in exact symmetry. Our tree is lopsided with a homemade star falling off, and decorations with pictures of my kids in grade school. Best tree ever! Hope you have happy holidays. : )
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Lol that's very funny. Honestly though I love that tree! I can't stand perfect trees that are color coordinated, every branch in exact symmetry. Our tree is lopsided with a homemade star falling off, and decorations with pictures of my kids in grade school. Best tree ever! Hope you have happy holidays. : )
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Comment Written 28-Nov-2017