Willy
He came and he left...33 total reviews
Comment from Mitchell Brontė
Think you have achieved a great deal in fifty words, an interesting story, a pinch of real life and something to ponder.
Very well done
Mitchell
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Think you have achieved a great deal in fifty words, an interesting story, a pinch of real life and something to ponder.
Very well done
Mitchell
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Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from mmonaghan777
What a shocker! Two stresses. One to handle. One to control. It seems Willy turned out to be a comfort. For fifty words nice job on beginning, middle and end.
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What a shocker! Two stresses. One to handle. One to control. It seems Willy turned out to be a comfort. For fifty words nice job on beginning, middle and end.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from amada
Oh gee. This leave much to the imagination. I like the succintness of the words and the simple short paragraphs. Like a quiet person...there are thunders underneath.
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Oh gee. This leave much to the imagination. I like the succintness of the words and the simple short paragraphs. Like a quiet person...there are thunders underneath.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from Thomas Bowling
It sounds like you lost two dogs on te same day. Forgive me, but what kind of man leaves his wife of forty-five years and then returns when he's dying?
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It sounds like you lost two dogs on te same day. Forgive me, but what kind of man leaves his wife of forty-five years and then returns when he's dying?
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from GWinterwin
Oh my what a sad story. You did a good job of giving much information with a very few words. This sounds like a very sad time for you but you did a great job of telling about it.
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Oh my what a sad story. You did a good job of giving much information with a very few words. This sounds like a very sad time for you but you did a great job of telling about it.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from rockinm76233
Well once again you have been able to capture with your words what a sad, sad, time it must have been in your life. You lost your husband and your dog and that's sad. Keep writing.
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Well once again you have been able to capture with your words what a sad, sad, time it must have been in your life. You lost your husband and your dog and that's sad. Keep writing.
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from Dean Kuch
Poor Willy! I wonder what in the world happened to him?
Could it be possible that Willy willingly followed your husband Mike to the "other side", do you think?
It's said that when someone dies and another person is making human contact with the dying at their final time of death, a brief portal is opened between this world--the world of the living--and the next--the land of the dead--and it could conceivably be entered into by the living soul. But it's quick as a flash and the living must be prepared and ready to enter when it occurs.
Sometimes, Lois, truth is much stranger than fiction.
~Dean
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Poor Willy! I wonder what in the world happened to him?
Could it be possible that Willy willingly followed your husband Mike to the "other side", do you think?
It's said that when someone dies and another person is making human contact with the dying at their final time of death, a brief portal is opened between this world--the world of the living--and the next--the land of the dead--and it could conceivably be entered into by the living soul. But it's quick as a flash and the living must be prepared and ready to enter when it occurs.
Sometimes, Lois, truth is much stranger than fiction.
~Dean
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Willy came to be with your husband. Animals have amazing abilities and just know or are led to be there. What a fabulous story, true too and I believe it. I hope you win, it just can't get better than this. Superb, my friend. Good luck! xx
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Willy came to be with your husband. Animals have amazing abilities and just know or are led to be there. What a fabulous story, true too and I believe it. I hope you win, it just can't get better than this. Superb, my friend. Good luck! xx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
OMG THIS HAS TO WIN....I am awestruck....I totally believe you...dogs and cats are spiritual creatures. I bought my female dog for company but both her and his dog prefer him yet I take care of all heir needs and pay for them! The most amazing story I have ever read and I know for a fact your dog is with your ex mike in heaven much love Meia xx
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OMG THIS HAS TO WIN....I am awestruck....I totally believe you...dogs and cats are spiritual creatures. I bought my female dog for company but both her and his dog prefer him yet I take care of all heir needs and pay for them! The most amazing story I have ever read and I know for a fact your dog is with your ex mike in heaven much love Meia xx
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017
Comment from humpwhistle
A fifty-word limit is a harsh mistress. I wonder if you bit off a story
a bit too complicated for fifty words.
I'm also unclear about what 'worried' you when your husband
came home 'dying of cancer'.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
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A fifty-word limit is a harsh mistress. I wonder if you bit off a story
a bit too complicated for fifty words.
I'm also unclear about what 'worried' you when your husband
came home 'dying of cancer'.
One man's opinion.
Peace, Lee
Comment Written 14-Oct-2017