Geoffrey's Musings.
Viewing comments for Chapter 56 "A Wall Scrawl."A book of Stories, Essays and Poetry.
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Comment from EverInParadise
Hmmn. Maybe, Self Improvement. This is such a nice piece joined by the art you chose it has a good message that actually doesn't say anything. I like it. Good job. I hope you find a good place to submit it.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Hmmn. Maybe, Self Improvement. This is such a nice piece joined by the art you chose it has a good message that actually doesn't say anything. I like it. Good job. I hope you find a good place to submit it.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks new friend I think. I had a lousy review this morning (here in Australia) that I thought might be a newby but alas not!
Comment from dboverton
Thank you for sharing this writing. I imagine problems we "face" are just as we stand at a wall we drive ourselves mad up/about. We think and we think...we think and think, but never solving anything because all we are doing is thinking not presenting. It's like praying for something like a new job, and never filling out applications. Sometimes our problematic walls are to beautiful to destroy so we learn/write upon them to clarify their beauty. Thank you for sharing once again.
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thank you for sharing this writing. I imagine problems we "face" are just as we stand at a wall we drive ourselves mad up/about. We think and we think...we think and think, but never solving anything because all we are doing is thinking not presenting. It's like praying for something like a new job, and never filling out applications. Sometimes our problematic walls are to beautiful to destroy so we learn/write upon them to clarify their beauty. Thank you for sharing once again.
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks, yet another new friend I think. I believe in reciprocating so I will check out your stuff later, had a lousy review a while ago. Surprisingly not from a newby!
Comment from Choco
I like having the graffiti above the poem. Beyond that it seems we all sometimes have problems like that. They seem unsolvable and sometimes they are. Sometimes putting them away allows your brain to marinate the problem and come up with a solution.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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I like having the graffiti above the poem. Beyond that it seems we all sometimes have problems like that. They seem unsolvable and sometimes they are. Sometimes putting them away allows your brain to marinate the problem and come up with a solution.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Dunno why the Lousy vote. Are you new not understanding the voting system. There were No spags so why?
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I checked your profile seems you have been on FS a long time please explain the vote.
Comment from royowen
Just a normalise rhyming quatrain 9597 abcb rhyming I would think Geoff. Yes it's anazing how many times I'm trying to recall a word, a vague, but well known memory come event, and can't get it off the top of my tongue. Well done Geoff, good thought for the month. Blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Just a normalise rhyming quatrain 9597 abcb rhyming I would think Geoff. Yes it's anazing how many times I'm trying to recall a word, a vague, but well known memory come event, and can't get it off the top of my tongue. Well done Geoff, good thought for the month. Blessings, Roy
Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks mate for the suggestions on Form type. Notice the lousy vote above. Hope they are new and don't understand the system.
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Me too bro.
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I enjoyed reading this poem and I am really glad you discovered it as you cleaned. I am in the process of cleaning my den. I hope I find an equally valuable gem.
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reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed reading this poem and I am really glad you discovered it as you cleaned. I am in the process of cleaning my den. I hope I find an equally valuable gem.
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Comment Written 03-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 03-Sep-2017
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Thanks Sis only just put this up! Forst cab off the rank! Can you suggest a form?
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I'm lousy with poetic form. I just enjoy reading it.