Perennials of War
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Comment from c_lucas
Treasure hunting with children can be very serious business. A child's imagination can run wild. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Treasure hunting with children can be very serious business. A child's imagination can run wild. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 07-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
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My pleasure.
Comment from royowen
They (Jane and Emily) devise a game of pirates, with pirate cove their destination, and Emily wearing the only eye patch and pirate paraphernalia and catch Anderson under the table! Well done, a fun episode Barbara, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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They (Jane and Emily) devise a game of pirates, with pirate cove their destination, and Emily wearing the only eye patch and pirate paraphernalia and catch Anderson under the table! Well done, a fun episode Barbara, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the interesting review.
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Welcome
Comment from Curly Girly
Emily loves her Daddy. Your writing shows that she admires her father--lucky girl to have a good dad.
from cardboard and aluminum foil "Now, you look
from cardboard and aluminum foil[.] "Now, you look
Oh No! Should we enter?"
Oh, no! Should we enter?"
Emily is enjoying playing her pirate game. Making a cave out of blankets in the house is a cool idea for young kids. Now she hears a man's voice laughing....
Hi, Barbara.
I found this Kindle book on Amazon and bought myself a copy. I haven't started reading it yet, but it has good reviews. You might like to give it a try:
https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B071NPVK28/ref=oh_aui_d_detailpage_o00_?ie=UTF8&psc=1
Nicole
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Emily loves her Daddy. Your writing shows that she admires her father--lucky girl to have a good dad.
from cardboard and aluminum foil "Now, you look
from cardboard and aluminum foil[.] "Now, you look
Oh No! Should we enter?"
Oh, no! Should we enter?"
Emily is enjoying playing her pirate game. Making a cave out of blankets in the house is a cool idea for young kids. Now she hears a man's voice laughing....
Hi, Barbara.
I found this Kindle book on Amazon and bought myself a copy. I haven't started reading it yet, but it has good reviews. You might like to give it a try:
https://www.amazon.com/gp/product/B071NPVK28/ref=oh_aui_d_detailpage_o00_?ie=UTF8&psc=1
Nicole
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the catch and thank you for the advice. I just ordered the book.
Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. I think you are right to keep the chapters a bit shorter as you have been doing. It makes it easier on us reviewers who read so much every day. LOL I enjoyed this cute and well-written chapter.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Excellent. I think you are right to keep the chapters a bit shorter as you have been doing. It makes it easier on us reviewers who read so much every day. LOL I enjoyed this cute and well-written chapter.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review.
Comment from Sis Cat
Excellent choice of play between Shana and Emily. I saw a parallel narative in this. I saw the pirates as a metaphor for the Russian mafia, and the lost treasure as a metaphor for the stolen painting. This is a bond-strengthening scene between characters but it also echoes the broader narrative. Your prose is crisp with sparkling dialogue and descriptions the move your story along.
Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Excellent choice of play between Shana and Emily. I saw a parallel narative in this. I saw the pirates as a metaphor for the Russian mafia, and the lost treasure as a metaphor for the stolen painting. This is a bond-strengthening scene between characters but it also echoes the broader narrative. Your prose is crisp with sparkling dialogue and descriptions the move your story along.
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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I could just hug you. You always catch my intentions. Many don't and I've been hit with the stars because they didn't understand all that was going on. Thank you.
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Oh, thank you, Barbara. I am glad I caught your intentions.
Comment from dejohnsrld (Debbie)
A very well written chapter and fun to read. I can't believe it is time for school already. Where did the summer go?I don't think Savannah Love was too politically incorrect--I didn't pick up on that at all.
If you want politically incorrect--look at Mr. Trump--he's the perfect example.
Take care, my friend~Debbie
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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A very well written chapter and fun to read. I can't believe it is time for school already. Where did the summer go?I don't think Savannah Love was too politically incorrect--I didn't pick up on that at all.
If you want politically incorrect--look at Mr. Trump--he's the perfect example.
Take care, my friend~Debbie
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for the kind review and comment on Savannah Love. I didn't see that either, but was afraid I wasn't looking at the novel realistically.
Comment from Wabigoon
Barbara--
Used to make blanket caves and houses when a kid. I don't think I ever had anyone make it like a scavenger hunt though. Thanks, this was fun and, yes, short enough so that I was tempted to read it. Don't know your work at all. Now I do.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
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reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Barbara--
Used to make blanket caves and houses when a kid. I don't think I ever had anyone make it like a scavenger hunt though. Thanks, this was fun and, yes, short enough so that I was tempted to read it. Don't know your work at all. Now I do.
Best
Wabigoon/Jeff
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 06-Aug-2017
reply by the author on 06-Aug-2017
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Thank you for dropping by and leaving this kind review.