Unwanted Dog
Viewing comments for Chapter 1 "Chapter One: Chance Encounter"A short autobiography
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Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written story about what your father/dad meant to you through your life. A dad who stands by you in any circumstances good or bad and never judge you when you are wrong, but rather show you the right way.
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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A very well-written story about what your father/dad meant to you through your life. A dad who stands by you in any circumstances good or bad and never judge you when you are wrong, but rather show you the right way.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Thanks.
Comment from DR DIP
What a beautiful story Brett. I love these feel good stories. Sounds like you had a hard and interesting young life. Your Dad sounded like a great man. Thanks for sharing.
dip
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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What a beautiful story Brett. I love these feel good stories. Sounds like you had a hard and interesting young life. Your Dad sounded like a great man. Thanks for sharing.
dip
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this posting, Dip.
Always appreciate your comments, support, and reviews.
Comment from Ricky1024
You -penned a nice self biography honoring a dad you never had.
I like how he pushed you along and asked if you want a friend or a dad?
Mine was a Naval Chief lost in his career and a bottle of booze.
God took him in '72.
'I have two step daughters and they went the other direction calling me Richard.
Their real dad died of pancreatic cancer a few years back but they are well grown being 70's child.
Thanks,
Ricky
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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You -penned a nice self biography honoring a dad you never had.
I like how he pushed you along and asked if you want a friend or a dad?
Mine was a Naval Chief lost in his career and a bottle of booze.
God took him in '72.
'I have two step daughters and they went the other direction calling me Richard.
Their real dad died of pancreatic cancer a few years back but they are well grown being 70's child.
Thanks,
Ricky
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come so I invite you to ride along.
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Sounds like an offer to Hell?
LOL!
Ricky 1024
Comment from apky
This was a most befitting tribute to this man, who became your Dad. I was touched.
A path I quickly learned to navigate, knowing full well what the consequences of allowing my misdeeds to deviate me off the trail of were. ~ this sentence is a bit convoluted and you probably need to rewrite it differently.
Eleven years, that's how long you have been gone, Dad. It might as well have been yesterday. Although I know that we will be together again some day, another lesson you taught me, I love you, Dad, and miss you more with each passing day.
~ I join you in this, and I'm sure your Dad had the biggest grin, wherever he is.
Apky
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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This was a most befitting tribute to this man, who became your Dad. I was touched.
A path I quickly learned to navigate, knowing full well what the consequences of allowing my misdeeds to deviate me off the trail of were. ~ this sentence is a bit convoluted and you probably need to rewrite it differently.
Eleven years, that's how long you have been gone, Dad. It might as well have been yesterday. Although I know that we will be together again some day, another lesson you taught me, I love you, Dad, and miss you more with each passing day.
~ I join you in this, and I'm sure your Dad had the biggest grin, wherever he is.
Apky
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this portion of my autobiography.
Much more to come, and also about my Dad, so I invite you to ride along.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
Wow is this real? If not, you made it feel real and it was a great piece of writing. YOu kept it in order and used very good descriptive words. Nicely done for the challange
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Wow is this real? If not, you made it feel real and it was a great piece of writing. YOu kept it in order and used very good descriptive words. Nicely done for the challange
Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Yes, this is true. Every word of it.
I appreciate your comments and support.
Thanks for taking the time to read this and to write a review.
Comment from Pearl Edwards
This is a lovely write Brett of how Dusty West became your Dad and you became his 'little man' and changed your life. A great response to this challenge, and well told. Thanks for sharing,
cheers
valda
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reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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This is a lovely write Brett of how Dusty West became your Dad and you became his 'little man' and changed your life. A great response to this challenge, and well told. Thanks for sharing,
cheers
valda
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Comment Written 20-Jun-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2017
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Glad you enjoyed this article.
Thanks for taking the time to read it and to write a review.
Much appreciated.