To love again like you do
Written wishing that a heart can mend and love again22 total reviews
Comment from marybell1
I enjoyed reading your romance poem "To love again like you do". You rhymed it well except in verse two lines one and four. An 's' alters the rhyming. You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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I enjoyed reading your romance poem "To love again like you do". You rhymed it well except in verse two lines one and four. An 's' alters the rhyming. You may wish to review this.
All the best.
Marybell1.
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Thank you so much for the wonderful feedback
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You are most welcome.
Marybell1.
Comment from frierajac
Alright, Darling, And you sound like you are trying for a song lyric to an old standard Frank Sinatra love song. I think with a bit of pruning you might have something here.
good luck
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reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Alright, Darling, And you sound like you are trying for a song lyric to an old standard Frank Sinatra love song. I think with a bit of pruning you might have something here.
good luck
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Comment Written 14-Sep-2017
reply by the author on 14-Sep-2017
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Smiles :) You are far too kind. These were simple emotions that I had to write, so pleased that you thought so highly of them.
Hugs.
Simply Teresa
