Bugger it
Get off your High Horse - A new Con24 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written short poem about that little bug that gives you such a surprise to talk to.you that you swallow him before you know. It is disgusting, but we can survive
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A very well-written short poem about that little bug that gives you such a surprise to talk to.you that you swallow him before you know. It is disgusting, but we can survive
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi Sandra, Thanks for your words and it is awful when you accidently swallow a big Cough Cough LOL Cheers
Comment from MaggieF
Lovely colourful picture, couldn't find the bug! Ha, ha, this made me laugh. I love the idea of the bug talking. The poem flows well with good rhythm and rhyme. I loved 'Could only say "Oh Bugger it". think I might have said something worse!! MaggieF
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Lovely colourful picture, couldn't find the bug! Ha, ha, this made me laugh. I love the idea of the bug talking. The poem flows well with good rhythm and rhyme. I loved 'Could only say "Oh Bugger it". think I might have said something worse!! MaggieF
Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi MaggieF, Thanks for your review and fun feedback .Glad you liked to read about him and didn't keep your mouth shut LOL your feedback is appreciated .Cheers
Comment from oliver818
Haha great poem. I like the image of the speaking bug getting ready to be eaten. I like the humor you included, and the pace and flow of this piece are great too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
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reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Haha great poem. I like the image of the speaking bug getting ready to be eaten. I like the humor you included, and the pace and flow of this piece are great too. Thanks for sharing and have a great day
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Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hi oliver818. Oh Thank you so much for your feedback I was a little worried how this may be received and I hope your got a laugh that was my aim. Cheers my friend your support is appreciated.
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks of how one got to say 'Oh Bugger' as such an experience is shared, feeling it like get off your high horse a new con, indeed, if it happens to one really, so awkward; I liked
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This speaks of how one got to say 'Oh Bugger' as such an experience is shared, feeling it like get off your high horse a new con, indeed, if it happens to one really, so awkward; I liked
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Comment Written 31-May-2017
reply by the author on 31-May-2017
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Hu Alcreator Litt Dear, Thanks for reading and reviewing my Bug poem for this contest. I hope it gave you a smile. Your support is appreciated Cheers
