2017 JAPANESE POETRY
Viewing comments for Chapter 38 "Haiku (Cold spell in May)"A collection of Japanese poetry
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Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
this is perfect and anyone that says there is not is totally blind.
We have had record drops in temperature after having a heat wave and not we are having record rainfall and cold.
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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this is perfect and anyone that says there is not is totally blind.
We have had record drops in temperature after having a heat wave and not we are having record rainfall and cold.
Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy
Comment from lyenochka
May can be like that. I remember one Memorial Day when we had hail. But I wasn't sure what "bopping branches" meant as I think of "bopping" as a hitting motion or perhaps it's meant as a "dancing" move or like "bobbing?" Thought-provoking last line which makes me thing of the incongruity of cold on what should be a warm spring day just the impact that ignorance has.
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reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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May can be like that. I remember one Memorial Day when we had hail. But I wasn't sure what "bopping branches" meant as I think of "bopping" as a hitting motion or perhaps it's meant as a "dancing" move or like "bobbing?" Thought-provoking last line which makes me thing of the incongruity of cold on what should be a warm spring day just the impact that ignorance has.
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Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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Thank you for the review and kind words. I appreciate the feedback.
Gypsy
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi Gypsy; your haiku is definitely referencing nature, but I can't quite make the connection with 'blind ignorance.' Maybe, it is blind because of the gray skies, or the fact that it is cold in May.
Why is there no picture? I can only comment on your choice of background and enhanced font - they make a pretty picture.
~patty~
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reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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Hi Gypsy; your haiku is definitely referencing nature, but I can't quite make the connection with 'blind ignorance.' Maybe, it is blind because of the gray skies, or the fact that it is cold in May.
Why is there no picture? I can only comment on your choice of background and enhanced font - they make a pretty picture.
~patty~
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Comment Written 25-May-2017
reply by the author on 25-May-2017
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Climate change is a topic of debate but to me it's obvious. Our present president is against collaborating with other countries to use clean energy and improve our air quality. Today I was sitting outside in the cold when the last few days have been in the 90s. How can anyone ignore this?
My computer crashed and I am waiting for a new computer. I always take pride on attractive presentations but with my Kindle this is the best I can do.
Thank you for the review and kind words sweetie pie.
Gypsy