2017 JAPANESE POETRY
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Comment from DR DIP
Gypsy and here's me thinking all haiku were over three lines? Sounds like a beautiful morning walk that is expressed beautifully in your three haiku.
Haiku are still a learning curve for me there are so many variations, rules and parameters. like does every Haiku have to have a kigo?. Just curious.
Thanks for sharing your haiku suite.
dip
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Gypsy and here's me thinking all haiku were over three lines? Sounds like a beautiful morning walk that is expressed beautifully in your three haiku.
Haiku are still a learning curve for me there are so many variations, rules and parameters. like does every Haiku have to have a kigo?. Just curious.
Thanks for sharing your haiku suite.
dip
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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There are many rules to haiku. Mostly due to how old it is .... over 300 years! When traditional haiku doesn't have a kigo it is senryu but modern haiku does not require a kigo. Thank you for reading, my friend, I appreciate it.
Gypsy
Comment from Thomas Bowling
No one writes Haiku like you. You write like one of the old masters. You have a gift for it. You should start a class. That's right, you did.
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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No one writes Haiku like you. You write like one of the old masters. You have a gift for it. You should start a class. That's right, you did.
Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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hahaha ... yes, Thomas, I teach every month. Thank you for reading my haiku and for the kind words. :)
Gypsy
Comment from Nikki-Nicole
You've written a nice set of poetry.
Good artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art.
A Haiku Suite would be a great contest write.
Thanks for sharing your Haiku Suite.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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You've written a nice set of poetry.
Good artwork: The image shown supports the poem. The background color goes well with the art.
A Haiku Suite would be a great contest write.
Thanks for sharing your Haiku Suite.
Good luck with your future writing.
-Nicole-
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Comment Written 13-May-2017
reply by the author on 13-May-2017
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Thank you for reading my haiku and for the kind words. :)
Gypsy