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A science fiction book about genetic engineering.

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Comment from Mike Stevens
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Another fine chapter, Rhonda--and all this reading about leprechauns has made me hungry for a big bowl of Lucky Charms--the'd better be magically delicious, because I done don't got none!




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 Comment Written 06-Mar-2017


reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
    Awww. You should get a bowl. I think I will, too!
reply by Mike Stevens on 06-Mar-2017
    On the bright side, I've found Invisible Lucky Charms don't add girth to my girlish figure!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
    Ahh, then those are the ones I need!
reply by Mike Stevens on 06-Mar-2017
    I pay for them with my invisible money--boy was that ever lame!
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
    We do what we can... I'll make a fantasy writer out of you yet!
reply by Mike Stevens on 06-Mar-2017
    You mean like my fantasy of actually having some talent?
reply by the author on 06-Mar-2017
    Tsk, tsk!