Comment from
Douglas Paul
This is a good haiku with a strong overall presentation. I do think you captured the coexistence of nature within the city. Very well done, my friend
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2017
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2017
Thank you, Douglas, you are kind and generous. I appreciate that you took the time to give me your helpful feedback. :)