Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem and an interesting format that I definitely will try very soon. In our dreams anything are possible and we can climb and ride the moon beams.

 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Thank you, Sandra, I look forward to your effort on this poetic form. Yes, in our dreams anything in possible, I agree!

love,
jeni

Comment from DR DIP

Excellent

And here's me thinking that the trois-par-huit was a sex position lol

nice write although the meter was a bit erratic but hey who gives a shit the poem is nice Thanks for posting
Hey its probably only the poem style its perfectly fine you'll find
dip

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

The meter was erratic? I'll have to look at that and perhaps revise. I do know that there is no requirement as to meter in the form, but I don't want the poem to be off-putting.

I'm glad you liked it, though.

love,
jeni

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I liked this piece. The imagery is vivid and impressive. I particularly liked the moonbeam staircases idea. Nice format and structure.

All the best
GMG

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 Comment Written 01-Feb-2017

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reply by the author on 01-Feb-2017

Dear GMG,

I'm happy that you liked this poem and that you could find imagery contained in the poem. Yes, the moonbeam staircase is something that appears in my work often. Thank you for your compliments on the presentation. I hope you stop back again soon.

Best,
luna