Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 11 "Seasons"a place to gather my poetic forms
51 total reviews
Comment from Irish Rain
I love seasonal poems, I don't know if its because of their natural order, or because I find the beauty in each season. This is full of that beauty, blessings...
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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I love seasonal poems, I don't know if its because of their natural order, or because I find the beauty in each season. This is full of that beauty, blessings...
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you for reading and your gracious review, IR.
Comment from MsPetra
This is a lovely poem about the seasons. I wish I could write something like this. I have tried and it didn't work out for me. lol
I enjoyed the poem as a whole. There isn't anything that stands out above the rest. That is an accomplishment. You did an excellent job on this!
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely poem about the seasons. I wish I could write something like this. I have tried and it didn't work out for me. lol
I enjoyed the poem as a whole. There isn't anything that stands out above the rest. That is an accomplishment. You did an excellent job on this!
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Dear MsPetra,
I'm over the moon with this six star review. I want you to know that I am grateful and honored. Thank you for reading and leaving me this awesome review!
Comment from closetpoetjester
What? Only half past three? LOL A delightfully chilly descent towards that Spring equinox.
We're in the middle of summer at the mo so can't relate right now, but when I'm in the throes of winter and my tootsies are ready to snap off, I'll remember this poem.
Roll on Spring! haha
Nicely rhymed and this had some vivid poetic pictures along the way. Well done Luna.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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What? Only half past three? LOL A delightfully chilly descent towards that Spring equinox.
We're in the middle of summer at the mo so can't relate right now, but when I'm in the throes of winter and my tootsies are ready to snap off, I'll remember this poem.
Roll on Spring! haha
Nicely rhymed and this had some vivid poetic pictures along the way. Well done Luna.
Cheers P
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Yeah, half-past thre so they can get the horses in, fed and put away before dark comes. Thanks, closetpoetjester.
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Yes, I do like your poem about the seasons. Simultaneously, almost, I wrote a seasons poem about my lover and me. Your imagery is good, the rhyming is in good meter and your poem is worthy of others reading it.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Yes, I do like your poem about the seasons. Simultaneously, almost, I wrote a seasons poem about my lover and me. Your imagery is good, the rhyming is in good meter and your poem is worthy of others reading it.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Dear Nancyrabbrose, I'm glad that you liked this and left me this courteous review.
Comment from Janet Foor
A lovely poem for all the seasons Jeni. Fall is my favorite except when it's spring and then that's my favorite. That works for each season of the year. I try to appreciate what each has to offer.
Very nicely done with rhyming couplets and good use of alliteration.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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A lovely poem for all the seasons Jeni. Fall is my favorite except when it's spring and then that's my favorite. That works for each season of the year. I try to appreciate what each has to offer.
Very nicely done with rhyming couplets and good use of alliteration.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Janet,
Fall is my favorite as well, then spring, and then I can take or leave the others. Thanks for your kind review.
Comment from dragonpoet
You did well in encompassing all the seasons in one poem. You got the hope of rebirth of Spring, the heat of summer and the briskness of fall. You have strong use of scent and sight in this poem. At least you use a warm den to show winter instead of speaking directly of the cold. You intertwined the words and the artwork in the last stanza.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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You did well in encompassing all the seasons in one poem. You got the hope of rebirth of Spring, the heat of summer and the briskness of fall. You have strong use of scent and sight in this poem. At least you use a warm den to show winter instead of speaking directly of the cold. You intertwined the words and the artwork in the last stanza.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Dear Joan,
Thank you for this very lovely review. I enjoyed reading it. I appreciate your attention to my work.
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No problem, Luna.
Joan
Comment from bertranclan
Enjoyed this poem of reactions to the seasons. I, too, like writing about the seasons. You are a very capable poet, and I love your rhyme. Well done.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Enjoyed this poem of reactions to the seasons. I, too, like writing about the seasons. You are a very capable poet, and I love your rhyme. Well done.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you, bertranclan, for your complimentary remarks contained in this review. I'm happy you took time to read the poem.
Comment from DR DIP
Luna that is very good I love the beat your poem creates and nice imagery as well I think its the AABB rhyme scheme It really works well for this poem
dip
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Luna that is very good I love the beat your poem creates and nice imagery as well I think its the AABB rhyme scheme It really works well for this poem
dip
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you, dip, I'm happy that you enjoyed the rhythm and imagery of my rhyme scheme. Yes, it is '
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Thanks, dip
Comment from DonandVicki
You seem to be a poetic machine, I like the reference that you connect the Heavens,
Earth and Man in your well composed verse. All we need to do is to look at Gods creations to be inspired.
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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You seem to be a poetic machine, I like the reference that you connect the Heavens,
Earth and Man in your well composed verse. All we need to do is to look at Gods creations to be inspired.
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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No not a machine, I just have a whole lot of time on my hands, due to a disability. So, I entertain myself by writing poetry!
Comment from crybry67
I do like it! You've captured the changing seasons very well. I like the smooth flow, and your excellent use of rhyme. Great job on this piece. Blessings. .. Christy
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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I do like it! You've captured the changing seasons very well. I like the smooth flow, and your excellent use of rhyme. Great job on this piece. Blessings. .. Christy
Comment Written 21-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 22-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Christy. I always appreciate your support. Thanks for letting me know what you did like ahbout this poem.
Love,
Jeni
