Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 13 "Too Much Nonsense"a place to gather my poetic forms
36 total reviews
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow, first of all I must thank you - this is a form I've never tried, and after reading your poem, I am encouraged and inspired - I just might give it a go sometime. I LOVED this - thank you for the notes, too!
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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Wow, first of all I must thank you - this is a form I've never tried, and after reading your poem, I am encouraged and inspired - I just might give it a go sometime. I LOVED this - thank you for the notes, too!
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2017
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I can't wait to see your effort on this one barb, I know that it will be superb! Thanks for letting me know that I inspired you.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Luna I like how you come up so may formats
First time I have seen a complex alliterisen
It's a good way to do a should I say a fairy tail wedding
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Hi Luna I like how you come up so may formats
First time I have seen a complex alliterisen
It's a good way to do a should I say a fairy tail wedding
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. I find my forms on a site called Shadowpoetry.com. There's lots of different ones there.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from estory
not really my cup of tea, but I liked the alliterations in it, you had some music going there. strong images, lots of movement, very upbeat. its been a long time since I read Tolkien. once it was one of my favorite books. but it is nice to be a little lighthearted sometimes. there is enough to worry about in the world today. it sounds like you had fun writing it. estory
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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not really my cup of tea, but I liked the alliterations in it, you had some music going there. strong images, lots of movement, very upbeat. its been a long time since I read Tolkien. once it was one of my favorite books. but it is nice to be a little lighthearted sometimes. there is enough to worry about in the world today. it sounds like you had fun writing it. estory
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks, estory. It was indeed fun to write. Yes, sometimes a bit of lightheartedness is needed.
Comment from crybry67
This form is new to me, so of course I gotta try it. I think you did a wonderful job on yours. Nice presentation as well. I love that shade of green. Blessings... Christy
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This form is new to me, so of course I gotta try it. I think you did a wonderful job on yours. Nice presentation as well. I love that shade of green. Blessings... Christy
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Christy, thank you so much for the six-star review. It warms my heart, I'm sure you know what I mean. I'm looking forward to reading yours!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Bill Schott
This allitersen, Too Much Nonsense, follows the format that you have chosen and introduces an interesting scene that pricks our imagination with thoughts of fairies, furry animals, and wedded bliss. Nice.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This allitersen, Too Much Nonsense, follows the format that you have chosen and introduces an interesting scene that pricks our imagination with thoughts of fairies, furry animals, and wedded bliss. Nice.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Bill. Gla you enjoyed. I appreciate your review
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Irish Rain
Very pretty, I won't pretend to understand this form, but I love all the fairies, pixies and snowbunnies. And the magical white wedding. Quite lovely, blessings...
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Very pretty, I won't pretend to understand this form, but I love all the fairies, pixies and snowbunnies. And the magical white wedding. Quite lovely, blessings...
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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It''s actually not that complicated, I bet you could do one. Thanks for the lovely review.
love and light,
jeni
Comment from mermaids
This is a lovely escape to a fantasy world. Your opening line " Mother moon hears flying fairies" draws the reader into your words. Your use of words takes the reader to another place which is what I need today.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This is a lovely escape to a fantasy world. Your opening line " Mother moon hears flying fairies" draws the reader into your words. Your use of words takes the reader to another place which is what I need today.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Dear mermaids,
I'm glad that you enjoyed this poem and thank you for the review. May I ask, why; did you mark the poem "average" (3 stars), when you enjoyed it so much? What that an error or is it your rating?
many thanks,
jeni
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I upgraded your poem to five stars, it is definitely a great poem and not a three. Sorry about the error. I am very tired, I work two jobs. Elaine
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No problem, Elaine, that happens to all of us at one time or another! I hope that you are able to get some rest in between jobs!
Thank you very much.
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
What a brilliant and magical. A beautiful yet sweet piece painted skillfully this is truly amazing it is really complemented by the picture also. Well done a fun yet magical piece. The last two lines sum the poem up perfectly and finish the 'fairy tle' perfectly! well done kind regards Meia :)
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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What a brilliant and magical. A beautiful yet sweet piece painted skillfully this is truly amazing it is really complemented by the picture also. Well done a fun yet magical piece. The last two lines sum the poem up perfectly and finish the 'fairy tle' perfectly! well done kind regards Meia :)
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thank you, Meia, for your kind review. I'm happy that you enjoyed this poem. Thanks for your continued attention to my work!
love and light,
jeni
Comment from Janet Foor
Another poetic form that is new to me. I love alliteration as I think it propels the poem with a smooth flow.
Sweet artwork to accompany this piece.
Blessings
Janet
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Another poetic form that is new to me. I love alliteration as I think it propels the poem with a smooth flow.
Sweet artwork to accompany this piece.
Blessings
Janet
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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Thanks very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed this poem and appreciate the review.
love and light,
luna
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
This is delightful! What I like best about it is the fact that each instance transitions seamlessly to the next word or line making it read wonderfully aloud. So many people tend to force the use of alliteration thinking it sounds masterful when in fact poorly executed alliteration is just as distracting as grade school rhyme. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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This is delightful! What I like best about it is the fact that each instance transitions seamlessly to the next word or line making it read wonderfully aloud. So many people tend to force the use of alliteration thinking it sounds masterful when in fact poorly executed alliteration is just as distracting as grade school rhyme. Well done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 20-Jan-2017
reply by the author on 20-Jan-2017
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I'm honored that you enjoyed my poem so much, and I thoroughly enjoyed reading your review. Thank you so much.
love and light,
jeni
