Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 15 "The Juggler"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
A lovely Rispetto delivered with a delightful message. It read aloud wonderfully. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
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A lovely Rispetto delivered with a delightful message. It read aloud wonderfully. Nicely done and thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks! I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
very good job with this format. I've never tried one of these, I'm too scared but not as scared as I'd be if a juggling clown invaded my dreams!
good meter and rhythm to the piece.
All the best
GMG
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Hi there,
very good job with this format. I've never tried one of these, I'm too scared but not as scared as I'd be if a juggling clown invaded my dreams!
good meter and rhythm to the piece.
All the best
GMG
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Go ahead and try one, you'll like it! ask Mikey! He likes it...hey Mikey!
Comment from papa55mike
This is a very well written poem and I love the picture. I learned a form today! I don't write much poetry but when I do it helps me keep my fiction sharp. This one needs to be in a contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
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This is a very well written poem and I love the picture. I learned a form today! I don't write much poetry but when I do it helps me keep my fiction sharp. This one needs to be in a contest!
Have a great day and God bless.
mike
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks so very much. I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from winnona
A very well-written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece very well.
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A very well-written poem. The words flowed well line to line combining easily and forming the message of the poem for the reader. Your artwork and background color completed the piece very well.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thank you, winnona! I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from kiwisteveh
Lovely Rispetto.
Since I have just written a piece featuring Donald Rump as a clown, I immediately starting looking to see if you were suggesting the same thing, but nom your clown seems to bring nothing but laughs and happiness!
Great rhyming and meter make this a pleasure to read.
Steve
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Lovely Rispetto.
Since I have just written a piece featuring Donald Rump as a clown, I immediately starting looking to see if you were suggesting the same thing, but nom your clown seems to bring nothing but laughs and happiness!
Great rhyming and meter make this a pleasure to read.
Steve
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Steve, I've got to read your poem! What's it called? Hey thanks for reading this. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for the review.
jeni
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Hi, Jeni. My piece was just one of thise silly 2-4-2 poems. It's called Coulrophobia (Fear of Clowns) and it should be near the top of my portfilio.
I see I called him Rump in my review - I might have to keep calling him that!
Comment from mbroyles2
Nice to see a memory of a clown that isn't frightful.
Some people are terrified of clowns.
I'm glad this one was pleasant.
"While juggling balls with seeming ease
the circus man began to sneeze;"
Really good.
Michael
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Nice to see a memory of a clown that isn't frightful.
Some people are terrified of clowns.
I'm glad this one was pleasant.
"While juggling balls with seeming ease
the circus man began to sneeze;"
Really good.
Michael
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Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Thanks Michael! I'm glad that you enjoyed and thank you for your review.
jeni
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hi Luna
What a fun poem to read in Rispetto format
Good work with the iambic tetrameter,which I never get right
Its good to read a fun and happy dream after some morbid poems I have read.
Gert
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Hi Luna
What a fun poem to read in Rispetto format
Good work with the iambic tetrameter,which I never get right
Its good to read a fun and happy dream after some morbid poems I have read.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jan-2017
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Dear Gert, thank you for this six-star review! I'm thrilled, honored and grateful. I'm happy that you found this work worthy of the elusive "sixth-star!" You are a good friend.
jeni
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Yes Luna,
your poem was filled with fun
