Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

And that "envelope rhyme scheme" you've mentioned worked wonderfully well in the composition of your stunning piece of poetic art too, Jeni.
Far too many exceptional lines to mention.
I'd be here all night...
~Dean

 Comment Written 11-Jan-2017

Comment from crybry67

Excellent

I wish I could give you six, but I'm out...

I like the rhyme scheme of this, and of course your excellent use of rhyme. The artwork chosen is a lovely complement for your poem. Blessings... Christy

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from sandy montgomery

Excellent

Cool art. This was a delightful poem transporting us into your fantasy. Nice rhythm to the piece. Your rhymes ate natural and unforced. Great piece of poetry. Thank you for sharing your work.

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from Gert sherwood

Excellent

Hi Luna
Great poem how Our eyes met sights spectacular ~
illuminated tapestry ~
maids spinning wheels of poetry
spoke in a dream vernacular.
I really like what you are saying-
that
Poetry is like a needle,
it weaves unthreaded thoughts
into an colorful piece of art
straight from ones heart.

Gert

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from Leineco

Excellent

The music you spun to tell this "tale" with
and the dreamlike imagery you employed
combined to produce a wonderfully hypnotic
read :-)

Very nicely done :-)

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from Mastery

Excellent

Such a lovely dedication to Mickey, Jeni. He would be proud of you and the poem, I am sure. I liked this stanza very much:

"Each one of the angelic sounds
was lyrical and flowery.
Legends, magic, frivolity
with buoyant threads the music bound."

Beautiful. blessings, Bob

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from davisr (Rhonda)

Excellent

Your poems always (okay, usually) make me want to crawl under a bit quilt, open a window, and just fall asleep looking at the stars. You draw me away into a world of your making.

Great job,
Rhonda

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very interesting poem you have penned. You used very good descriptive wording and I love the art work that you chose to go with this. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. Blessings, Teri

P.S. I love your picture on here!

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from Irish Rain

Excellent

I really like this style...never saw it before. Wonderful poem 'enveloped' in magic!! Lovely picture too, all-around great presentation, blessings...

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

Sounds like two people dreaming of their love and you are using metaphors to describe how they feel.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 10-Jan-2017

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reply by the author on 10-Jan-2017

Thanks for the kind review. I appreciate it and your attention to my work.

jeni

reply by dragonpoet on 10-Jan-2017

My pleasure, Jeni.

Joan