Luna's Form Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 18 "Imagination"a place to gather my poetic forms
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Comment from Irish Rain
I just LOVE your 'Imagination' palindrome!! Excellently crafted. Is there a trick to these? I got lucky with my first (and last)...you've created a magical world here! Blessings....
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I just LOVE your 'Imagination' palindrome!! Excellently crafted. Is there a trick to these? I got lucky with my first (and last)...you've created a magical world here! Blessings....
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Meia (MESAYERS)
Stunning magic infused write. It is effortless in it's flow and rhythm and is filled with delightful magical images. Truly a poem to savour and enjoy for anyone who loves magic and nature. I adored this. well done, M.
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Stunning magic infused write. It is effortless in it's flow and rhythm and is filled with delightful magical images. Truly a poem to savour and enjoy for anyone who loves magic and nature. I adored this. well done, M.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Thal1959
Glad to see you have been separating yourself from some of the gloomier poems you have written lately, Luna. No need to apologize, (Palindrome (yes, another one!). I have never tried a Palindrome yet, but yours are starting to inspire me. I especially like:
"writer to writer
dreamer to dreamer
seeker to seeker"
What a neat way to make three lines easy, lol. Very good work, Luna.
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Glad to see you have been separating yourself from some of the gloomier poems you have written lately, Luna. No need to apologize, (Palindrome (yes, another one!). I have never tried a Palindrome yet, but yours are starting to inspire me. I especially like:
"writer to writer
dreamer to dreamer
seeker to seeker"
What a neat way to make three lines easy, lol. Very good work, Luna.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi Jeni - yes, another Palindrome and a very good one. Reads well in both cases and your chosen words are good. The picture is gorgeous and quite spiritual. You certainly have a good command of the art of writing Palindromes. I can never think of doing it successfully. Very lovely overall display. Warm regards Dorothy
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Hi Jeni - yes, another Palindrome and a very good one. Reads well in both cases and your chosen words are good. The picture is gorgeous and quite spiritual. You certainly have a good command of the art of writing Palindromes. I can never think of doing it successfully. Very lovely overall display. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from crybry67
Palindromes are so challenging for me. You've done a wonderful job on yours. Excellent presentation, I enjoyed the read.
I would like to offer my condolences for the loss of your son. On a recent visit to your page, I was touched by your story of Mickey having helped so many. I felt moved to write a poem , which I would be honored for you to read, if you so desire. It's called On the Other Side of Midnight. Blessings to you... Christy
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Palindromes are so challenging for me. You've done a wonderful job on yours. Excellent presentation, I enjoyed the read.
I would like to offer my condolences for the loss of your son. On a recent visit to your page, I was touched by your story of Mickey having helped so many. I felt moved to write a poem , which I would be honored for you to read, if you so desire. It's called On the Other Side of Midnight. Blessings to you... Christy
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from DR DIP
Beautiful use of Alliteration throughout this wonderful write you have a wonderful expressive way in your poetry I must say. Thankyou for sharing another beautifully worded poem
dip
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Beautiful use of Alliteration throughout this wonderful write you have a wonderful expressive way in your poetry I must say. Thankyou for sharing another beautifully worded poem
dip
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from mbroyles2
This is outstanding.
"Dreamer to dreamer
Writer to writer
Seeker to seeker
Thoughts reflected through vusions"
Really good.
Michael
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This is outstanding.
"Dreamer to dreamer
Writer to writer
Seeker to seeker
Thoughts reflected through vusions"
Really good.
Michael
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Drew Delaney
I have to admit I'm not really understanding this exactly. Palidromes means running. Is that correct? I guess it's Greek mythology which I was not a student of and so I cannot get it, but I did like the imagery used.
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I have to admit I'm not really understanding this exactly. Palidromes means running. Is that correct? I guess it's Greek mythology which I was not a student of and so I cannot get it, but I did like the imagery used.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A mythical fantasy world where I was dancing with Pegasus and enjoying the dream taking me back to my childhood, lovely poem, love Dolly x
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A mythical fantasy world where I was dancing with Pegasus and enjoying the dream taking me back to my childhood, lovely poem, love Dolly x
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
Comment from jusylee72
I am sorry it was two years ago that you lost you precious son. Your poem is full of life which makes me believe you are on your way to a fuller life. I know it will never be the same but your imagination is writing alleterations for of life. Dream on imagination and comfot Luna in the night.
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I am sorry it was two years ago that you lost you precious son. Your poem is full of life which makes me believe you are on your way to a fuller life. I know it will never be the same but your imagination is writing alleterations for of life. Dream on imagination and comfot Luna in the night.
Comment Written 08-Jan-2017
